Webnovel Author: EmptyLogic - Fanfic&Novel Collection

9d

Commented

Interesting direction you're going for, author... keep up the great writing, every story should have its ups and down in terms of plot and story.

ch 33 Midnight Counsel

Bleach-The Sword God's Wives and Concubines

Anime & Comics · Yuri_Lover23

EmptyLogic

10d

Commented

Good so far, even though it's short... Write what you feel like is right author.

ch 18 I Came, I Saw, I Conquered

Fate: King of Vampires

Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness

EmptyLogic

10d

Commented

Thanks for the chapter, great work as always.

ch 17 Flame of Conquest

Fate: King of Vampires

Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness

EmptyLogic

10d

Commented

No need for it actually. You can just stay as is and continue making the story better, don't write different stories at the same time, it might jumble you up.

Thank you for the reviews, although I didn't expect that it would be 13 in one go. As much as I wanted to give bonus chapters for it, unfortunately, I don't have a stockpile for this story. Perhaps I will compensate for it in another way, and give you a story about the MC being transmigrated as Zelretch in the Age of Gods, where he was still Solomon's student in the next week. Now, enjoy the story.

Fate: King of Vampires

Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness

EmptyLogic

11d

Posted

This is my honest critique. The updates are fine, the author updates almost daily. The author doesn't have perfect grammer in his writing but it's still understandable and quite decent I'll say. I also like this new unique idea for the the nasuverse, it brings in fresh air. Overall, the author is still working on his writing and plot development, personally I wouldn't judge it just yet, but the author asked for a review so I did it anyways hahahaha... anyways, I think this was a unique idea BUT the world building is not there yet, the writing quality is still improving, the story development is currently ok but I hope the author can make it better, its heading towards the right direction thats for sure. Thank you author for this wonderful work, I hope you don't overwork yourself and always remember, don't treat it like a job.

Fate: King of Vampires

Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness

EmptyLogic

11d

Commented

Interesting continuation author, I'm delighted that you're doing well hahaha... keep up the good work 👏 🙌 👍

ch 16 Breed My Sister (R-18)

Fate: King of Vampires

Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness

EmptyLogic

14d

Commented

Ye I understand now. but still, as I was saying in my previous comments, this could be done better in alternative ways. by hypnotizing him and making him rampage or something along those lines. But you do you I guess... this is your writing after all... I'm just giving feedback, that what the comments are for, after all.

ch 32 Execution

Bleach-The Sword God's Wives and Concubines

Anime & Comics · Yuri_Lover23

EmptyLogic

14d

Replied to EmptyLogic

You also did this with his sister, I mean I understand that you want the MC to be more active and have more plot, but it can approached in another way better than this. I'm sorry if I'm complaining too much. it's just left a bad taste on me. keep on going on what you're doing author.

ch 31 crime

Bleach-The Sword God's Wives and Concubines

Anime & Comics · Yuri_Lover23

EmptyLogic

14d

Commented

So yeah, may I ask author? why would you do that? do you hqve that kind of fetish or something? I'm asking genuinely here, this isn't even supposed to be that deep and all just for fun, but THAT? please give me answers...

ch 31 crime

Bleach-The Sword God's Wives and Concubines

Anime & Comics · Yuri_Lover23

EmptyLogic

20d

Commented

It would be nice if you don't skip the story, but in the end this is YOUR story, write what you feel is right. If you feel like something is wrong you can just ask us, or you can research the things you wanna know.

Tell me your thoughts. Do you think this version is better or the old version was better? If you like the skip timeline where the MC's conquests and all of his relationships with his sisters are skipped and prefer a hundred years later, I will return the old version back. However, if you like this version, I will continue this and write all of his brutal conquests in the North in detail. His relationship with his sisters would come naturally too and not be skipped and dogshit like previously. However, the chat group would come late because of it too.

Fate: King of Vampires

Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness

EmptyLogic

20d

Commented

Don't rush the story and events that will happen.

Note: I rewrote chapters 8 and 9. The time skip part was a very terrible decision of mine. I feel hollow when writing the skip timeline. Too many parts were wasted because of my impatience in writing the chat group. His war with Odin didn't show, his raids and his conquests didn't show, his relationship with Altrouge didn't show, even Arcueid and Rita's part is neglected. So much potential is wasted because of my impatience. Now, enjoy the rewrite, and I assure you there is not a single word repeated from the old version. It's a wholly new version with the MC's epic battle with Valkyries under Odin's hand.

Fate: King of Vampires

Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness

EmptyLogic

20d

Commented

Good decision.

Note: I rewrote chapters 8 and 9. The time skip part was a very terrible decision of mine. I feel hollow when writing the skip timeline. Too many parts were wasted because of my impatience in writing the chat group. His war with Odin didn't show, his raids and his conquests didn't show, his relationship with Altrouge didn't show, even Arcueid and Rita's part is neglected. So much potential is wasted because of my impatience. Now, enjoy the rewrite, and I assure you there is not a single word repeated from the old version. It's a wholly new version with the MC's epic battle with Valkyries under Odin's hand.

Fate: King of Vampires

Anime & Comics · Great_Darkness

EmptyLogic

21d

Commented

kaguya and the sage of six paths can.

'Now that I think about it, I've watched all Naruto episodes during my past life and I don't remember anyone that can use both keke Genkai'

Naruto: The Slaver

Anime & Comics · ElvenHero

EmptyLogic

1mth

Commented

You should not down yourself in the complains of others, just take them as critiques and improve yourself :)

Warning: I don't have much experience in writing fight scenes, as you may have already realized, so I hope you won't be too hard on me

Kumo desu ga, Nani ka? - Edit System

Anime & Comics · ParodyGirl

EmptyLogic

1yr

Commented

Yey

Preparing for tomorrow! Y'all won the 1st 🥇 place offer!

Fairy Tail: Shinigami

Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

EmptyLogic

1yr

Commented

Depends on your bias, and I like rimuru more since it was my first read to the novel world.

(Author's Note: Who is stronger, Anos or Rimuru? This is a very controversial question, one has the power of destruction, while the other can create, destroy and alter)

Fate/Poseidon

Anime & Comics · Akros_Zero

EmptyLogic

1yr

Commented

Morgan pls, I pray for her, pls pls pls!!!

Morgan? Well, I guess there are chances for her, Ishtar? Nope, Artemis? Again it's possible for her to be in the harem, Original Jeanne of Apocrypha? She definitely will be in the harem. Medb? Obviously not! Female Gil? Ugh, nope.