I am a 21-year-old undergraduate student who would be riddled in debt if not for my mother. At the same time, it is because of her, I'm writing a story and trying to earn something to help ease her.
2021-05-05 Joined Global
Thanks for your lovely review.
Yoooo. This is sick I’m enjoying this.
ch 0 1 Transmigration
Fantasy · mrant12
You don’t have to agree to it. I made an opinion.
ch 0 2 Where the hell am I?
Fantasy · Nr_Yet1208
The paragraphs Novement from the confusion to the monsters to the burning in the leg to the coldness and it felt confusing. ‘More than the confusion I’ll attribute to waking up in a place and relaising there’s something with the grass and all that.
ch 0 2 Where the hell am I?
Fantasy · Nr_Yet1208
Not so sure of the first chapter personally. The things happening felt disjointed. Moving on.
ch 0 2 Where the hell am I?
Fantasy · Nr_Yet1208
I am not arguing, I am trying to educate you both as the ahthor and a person on how caught unawares is grammatically correct. Frankly don’t see this as an argument. 😀
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Fantasy · Kikiyobear
It’s not uncommon. In fact, a lot of people use it. Not just in my country but in others I have travelled to.
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Fantasy · Kikiyobear
I know but in this case, grammarly didn’t correct me when i punched it in. Also since Im talking large scale here, according to dictionaries, caught unawares and unaware are both grammarly correct. So theres no problem.
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Fantasy · Kikiyobear
This is introductory. Sorry its not your cup of tea, but there’s no such thing as too much narration.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
Fantasy · Kikiyobear
Not in this case, darling. According to grammarly. caught unawares is right.
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Fantasy · Kikiyobear
thanks
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
War Queen
Fantasy · Kikiyobear