Love the art of story telling, world building, character development
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
ch 0 2 dropped
Fantasy · The_Novel_Man
No explanation. just skipped forward to Volks approaching. It is implied that Acura tried to explain but no one believes him because of his history of bad behavior .
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Fantasy · And3r_son
The fight between Acura and Sori Took Place outside. when VOlks shows up they are already inside and situation handled by Nadine. Thanks for the observations.
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Fantasy · And3r_son
Good job, this is actually a great read! Glad i gave it a try.
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Fantasy · Mary_Brezler
Great Novel story so far, Author seems experienced by the way they tell the story
ch 0 2 Striking Green Eyes and Rose Bushes
Urban · Oracle_Myth
Genesiz literally curses for everything 😂 u gotta love it.
ch 0 7 Identity Of The Boss
Action · Choosen_Weirdoo
I love this!
ch 0 6 Captured By Suprise
Action · Choosen_Weirdoo
First thing first...that aint my kid! 😂
ch 0 1 I'm Bored
Fantasy · RJMidnight
If you havent updated the book, When “Raheem” is mentioned it is actually referring to “Sori”. corrections haS been made
ch 0 9 Lover not a Fighter
MERC$ - My Unique is a System
Fantasy · And3r_son