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Specific score: 3.8 Death Zone is the story of Kevin wanting to become the King of this world. Seems familiar? This story is pretty similar to Black Clover... and at first, I thought I was reading a fanfic of Black Clover with different characters. However, the author managed to make it a tad different. While the beginning seems a bit too much like that series, I ask readers to give it a try, since this story feels like it will become something a bit more different. Now onto the writing. It's not bad, but it could definitely improve. The writing feels like it's in Visual Novel format without the Visual Novel, which is a tad weird. I recommend the author to read a couple of novels and see how the format works. There's several grammar errors, but nothing that requires me to wash my eyes out. It's alright and it's readable. I feel like the story can become a lot better in the future when the author gains a bit more writing experience. And when it does, I'll be sure to change my review. In the meantime, please check out Death Zone.

Thank you for the review! The beginning is a bit slow, but I promise the future chapters will be very interesting! Expect more exciting things in the future!

Thank you for your review! I will make sure to keep the POV switching as smooth as possible!

Thank you for the kind words! It's nice to know that you're curious about their abilities. You'll have to tune in to find out!

Thank you for your review! I'll try to continue making this story accessible for all. I appreciate the nice words!

As of this review, I have read 5 chapters. Specific Rating: 5 out of 5 star This story is amazing. The character design and writing quality are sublime. I can tell the author put a lot of work crafting everything, from the world-building to the characters. I did find it difficult to read at times, and the first chapter was so long it felt as if it lasted an hour, but other than that, the writing was great. One thing that saddened me was the stability of updates. The author has said that they will update every Friday, which is definitely a bit long. It's a shame that we have to wait this long for such a great book. However, if waiting one week is the price to pay to get such quality, then I'm up for it. Other than that, all I have to say is: "Good job, author!"

Shameless 5 Star Review No Jutsu! (Before we start, I'd like to say that Project Libra has a discord server, the link is in the synopsis if you would like to join.) Alright, let's stop with the shameless plugs here. I'm Erxian, author of "Project Libra". Thank you for taking the time to read the reviews A little bit about myself. Well, I'm a non-native English speaker, a total weeb, and a sucker for fantasy novels. Pretty short introduction, but I think I listed everything I needed. Any feedback is appreciated. I will do my very best to answer every review possible so I can get the maximum amount of feedback. Your feedback helps me create the story in a way you and I can enjoy it. Thank you, and happy reading!

Definitely not your average story. For someone aged 13, this is excellent. The writing quality is great, and the story does not disappoint. This story has potential, and I hope that it reaches greater heights.

I don't usually give out 5 stars. Not just on Webnovel, anywhere really. However, this story is amazing. The characters are incredibly crafted and the dialogues are so rich and realistic it feels like I'm really sitting with the characters. Really, the first chapter blew my socks off, and I can't wait for more.

Thank you for your kind words! I will make sure to exceed your expectations!

This story seems to be in a visual novel format... without the visual stuff. While there is descriptive stuff, there's a lot of confusing dialogue here and there that overwhelmed me completely. I think the author needs to work on structuring and formating. I recommend reading several basic novels such as "Harry Potter" or "Percy Jackson". Basic books, however, they can teach a lot about proper formatting, punctuation, and grammar. If the author manages to fix this, I think this story has potential.

The story seems really interesting, and the characters feel believable. It seems that you have a good vocabulary. The problem is the grammar feels too foreign. I think you're ordering the words like you would in Vietnamese. The best way to improve that is to write, and read. Considering that English isn't your first language, this is good. The story is still readable, but there's room for improvement. I think over time, you'll improve by a lot. This story is very promising, so I ask readers to please give it a try.

Thank you so much for the review! This means a lot to me!

Thank you for the review. I understand your concern with the POV switching, future chapters will have a lot less switching. However, it is still important for me to switch POVs since the story relies on that. About Tokunaga, it's normal that she's a bit cold despite her position, however, this was done on purpose. I hope you stick around and see why she is so cold and what role she will play in the story.

I usually don't like isekais. Most of the time, I hate the cliche trope of MC going to another world and being overpowered. However, this book somehow does this differently. For some reason, this is quite enjoyable, The MC is funny and realistic, and his reactions and the situations he is put in are very realistic. I'd recommend this book to people who want a fresh look at the isekai genre.

Thank you for your review! In the future, I will make sure to make whoever's talking a bit more obvious. I understand that at times it may be confusing, and since dialogue is an important part of my story, I will try to fix this in future chapters.