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Are You Trying To Escape The Game?
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"Once you accept the rule and sign in the contract, you have no chances to get out of the game. No one can escape without trading. Finding out the correct answer or being taken your life."
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Hi, i really like this story. you describe everything really well and clean. good job author!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Enjoyed the story, but like what other people said, the grammar is iffy. For someone who learned English as a second language, it may be sufficient, but if you want to take the next level, you got to improve it. I'd recommend writing in Grammarly for the meantime.
Very interesting to say, the problem that I have is grammar you may want to use Grammarly for to have a better grammar I guess[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story seems really interesting, and the characters feel believable. It seems that you have a good vocabulary. The problem is the grammar feels too foreign. I think you're ordering the words like you would in Vietnamese. The best way to improve that is to write, and read. Considering that English isn't your first language, this is good. The story is still readable, but there's room for improvement. I think over time, you'll improve by a lot. This story is very promising, so I ask readers to please give it a try.
It is a very nice story. I really loved the plot and the characters. Keep on writing even if you don't get a lot of views. I'm sure the number of people who read this will increase in the future :).
I adore your story. Astonishing character builds, thrilling and awe-inspiring plot. I aspire to read more piece of literature work of yours.
It's really interesting and amazing. This Jun guy is so mysterious. The whole library thing is amazing too. I look forward to reading more chapters. :)[img=recommend]
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