I feel relieved to hear that. I never knew it would be this hard to create a character and his personality. So I was feeling conflicted if I am doing it right or wrong. and I am glad to hear that you are liking him.
Zarek felt kinda annoyed with the old man's tone. It felt like Zarek owed him something. He just said those words casually. More than that Zarek didn't want to get into any mess until he became more stronger. After all, Zarek himself is defenseless without Zerik. He himself doesn't have any power or background. Even though he is a disciple of the Regal Artificer Sect he could be said to be an outcast in the sect. He doesn't even have anyone close related. His parents were dead and he was taken in the Regal Artificer Sect because of his unique aura and high mental strength as a child who will later become a true disciple. But then because of Zarek failing their expectations he became only a burden, nothing more. He doesn't have anyone to protect him. So he has to be extra careful.
Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan
Well I feel like in most of the cultivation novels most character are kinda dumb and arrogant almost like they have just unplugged their brain. So I am at least try to keep most of the character in my novel human like. And all human are not dumb At least they are not dumb enough to see their own situation. I might add some arrogant char to spice up the story a bit in future. But don't have any plan for now cause its just the starting you know.
"Fine, we will do anything but let me take my companions to a doctor." The leader of the bandits agreed without much resistance. He knew they couldn't win anymore. All his companions were injured while he was placed with a dagger on his neck.
Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan
Aye aye captain.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2 : Genesis Codex Puppet
Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan
Thanks for your opinion. I will keep that in my mind.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 : A Unique Doll
Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan
Sus..... Amogus 🗿
Just to clarify, he won't grow alongside the doll as he has a curse. Currently, he is just training the doll.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5 : Steel Viper Body Tempering Technique
Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan
I don't usually play games but I started league of legend just some weeks ago :D
ch 0 8 Chapter 8 : How do I get money?
Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan
He will get stronger in future. But there will be some complications. But if I say more it will become a major spoiler.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5 : Steel Viper Body Tempering Technique
Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan
Check the update announcement. you will know it.
ch 413 Spirit Severing Physique
Games · MyLittleBrother
Aye thanks (❁´◡`❁)
ch 10 Chapter 10 : Blue Silver Fang
Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan
I tried to describe as much as I could but I am still not that good in it. :( So here's the reference I took the dagger from.
(Here's an image for reference.)
Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan
trying*
Yet again thanks for pointing it out. ^^
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Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan
Thanks for pointing it out. :)
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Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan
Alright I will keep that in mind. :)
xD
The librarian who was sitting behind the desk was an old man caressing his long beard. He said, "hmm. These are the weakest low rank techniques. Even if you didn't return it, it would have been fine as there are many copies of these weak low rank techniques." Generally borrowing or taking a technique outside the library wasn't allowed much less borrowing and not returning.
Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan
Technically yes. Life became a little hectic. My xm is also nxt month. So there won't be update till then. But I might start writing again in December if everything goes smoothly. Because I don't wanna drop the idea. If there ain't any update even after Dec you can remove it from ur library as it prolly means I completely dropped it.
ch 13 Chapter 13 : Red Bull Bandits Fall
Twin Dancer Aura Master
Fantasy · TheBlackHatMan