Webnovel Author: SightSeer - Fanfic Collection

I’ve read this story from when the highest chapter was 14, the story is interesting and the grammar and pacing are good but, there was a part which came out of nowhere. Some foreshadowing is needed and some parts of the story are explained and showed for longer than I would be interested in it Overall the story is good but the princess had like multiple chapters which showed her younger days when I hadn’t really known the character much yet.

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LGBT+ · ThaiYaki

SightSeer

11mth

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Ain’t she suffering from extensive blood loss?

ch 19 Chp 19 : Seeds

I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

LGBT+ · ThaiYaki

SightSeer

11mth

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From her arm.

ch 19 Chp 19 : Seeds

I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

LGBT+ · ThaiYaki

SightSeer

11mth

Commented

HM.

ch 0 8 Chp 8 : Small Cucumber

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LGBT+ · ThaiYaki

SightSeer

11mth

Commented

Hmm.

ch 0 7 Chp 7 : The Taste Of Warm Milk

I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

LGBT+ · ThaiYaki

SightSeer

11mth

Commented

Mm.

ch 0 5 Chp 5 : 10 strikes and your out!

I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

LGBT+ · ThaiYaki

SightSeer

11mth

Commented

Nice.

ch 0 3 Chp 3 : See You Soon Golden Spoon

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LGBT+ · ThaiYaki

SightSeer

11mth

Commented

Nice though things seemed to escalate to quickly, was there foreshadowing? I don’t remember I haven’t read this in a few months.

ch 16 Chp 16 : Elena

I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

LGBT+ · ThaiYaki

SightSeer

1yr

Commented

MMMMMMMM

ch 14 Chp 14 : Siun Is a Mixed Child?

I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

LGBT+ · ThaiYaki

SightSeer

1yr

Commented

HM MMMMMMMM

ch 11 Chp 11 : The Tank, The Scout, The Sword and The Jack

I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

LGBT+ · ThaiYaki

SightSeer

1yr

Commented

Mmmmmmm

ch 0 9 Chp 9 : The Second Son Of King Israel

I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

LGBT+ · ThaiYaki

SightSeer

1yr

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in*

ch 0 1 ..Where?

The Whole Interstellar Will Help Raise Me

LGBT+ · BNL73

SightSeer

1yr

Commented

There no other people here but I would say the writings good, other than a few areas that could’ve been written is a smoother way the overall composition is pretty decent.

ch 0 1 ..Where?

The Whole Interstellar Will Help Raise Me

LGBT+ · BNL73

Webnovel Author: SightSeer - Fanfic Collection

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I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

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I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

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I Refuse to Join The Hero's Party (BL)

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The Whole Interstellar Will Help Raise Me

The Whole Interstellar Will Help Raise Me