9th stage of Depression Refinement Realm
2021-05-14 Joined United Kingdom
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ch 68 Onto the Final Step
Fantasy · Shiyayori
No, she got forcefully summoned by the Angel and he wanted to steal her soul, but the system killed him instead and she stole his soul. Her real body was left without a soul, and taken over by another Ana (One of the Demon Elders at the outpost)
ch 29 On the Surface
Fantasy · Shiyayori
Just took a look; I'm going to have to give it a read now, haha. Maybe I should put my book on RR too...
ch 0 3 Leaving the Nest
Fantasy · Shiyayori
I'm not really focusing on Romance yet; characters will be aged up as the story goes on, and then it'll play a larger role, but the romance isn't the focus of the story as a whole. I think having well developed characters will make any romance, much more satisfying...
ch 63 First Followers...
Fantasy · Shiyayori
Seems like it...
ch 62 Complete Control
Fantasy · Shiyayori
I'm not totally decided; I usually do a super rough draft of a few directions the convo could go in, and then decide on how interesting I think it'll make the book later... Also, the 'having to kill another angel' was because of Adrian's envy of Rita, and part of why he made that request was because he never expected to fail in killing Syrin and taking her soul.
ch 62 Complete Control
Fantasy · Shiyayori
Thanks! I'm still not completely decided on how I want their interactions to progress yet...
ch 62 Complete Control
Fantasy · Shiyayori
Nah, it's just supposed to represent the opposing magics only tacitly connecting. I'm not really a fan of the split personality trope :)
ch 61 Light Magic Assimilation...
Fantasy · Shiyayori
Just a little oof, haha
ch 59 Soul Assimilation I
Fantasy · Shiyayori
Thanks for the feedback; that's still kinda along the lines of what I'm going for, so that's good haha.
ch 58 The Strongest Dreams Hide the Greatest Truths
Fantasy · Shiyayori
Thanks :)
ch 56 Friends in Body, Not in Soul (V)
Fantasy · Shiyayori
I had to skim read this… it’s s traumatic 😭
ch 0 -1 Prologue (4)
Fantasy · MegaC
Thank you :)
ch 55 Friends in Body, Not in Soul (IV)
Fantasy · Shiyayori
Not quite!
ch 54 Friends in Body, Not in Soul (III)
Fantasy · Shiyayori
Yeah, maybe a little below knee height.
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Fantasy · Shiyayori
Thanks for catching it :) I'm too used to first person...
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Fantasy · Shiyayori
That's fine. It would feel forced if I explained everything straight away, instead, I give hints through the descriptions, and it will become more obvious as the story goes on. She got attacked because the mist pacified them and prevented them from attacking, it also increased the MC's strength; so I was trying to get across the idea that it made them stronger as well, which is why they were so mad.
ch 0 7 Swarmed
Fantasy · Shiyayori
Ooh, thanks for catching it!
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Fantasy · Shiyayori
I don't have the time to do lots of comments right now, but if you've just started reading you should read the first 20 or so chapters over on royal road since they're all re-edited. I still haven't copied the edited versions over here yet--well except for the first chapter.
Demon of the Fold
Fantasy · Shiyayori