hey i was wondering if you could review my book as well
nice intro and really good hook as well
ch 0 1 I - A Blast of an Introduction
Fantasy · WriterSim13
yooo she already going there
"Get down on your knees! Do anything stupid and I will kill you!", Julie shouted in a bossy tone. She had to save her dignity in front of Jack
Fantasy · Syed_Taha_Hussain
she do be a tsundere
Jack lowered his eyes as the princess stood up. He wanted to make sure the girl felt safe in his presence. Julie saw the respect shown to her by this man. "Why is this man showing me such respect? Does he know who I am?", Julie thought. Deep inside, she was extremely grateful that this man showed up and saved her from those bandits. Had it not been for him, God knows what the bandits might have done to her. However Julie suddenly came back to her senses. She was the princess of this city and this man had just came so close to her moments ago. She had to save her ego! In a blink of an eye, Julie picked up a sword of one of the bandits and aimed it straight at Jack's throat.
Fantasy · Syed_Taha_Hussain
A very weird sorta style of writing which is nice, the characters seem to be different and entertaining which is very important. The story is offbeat which always add
Welcome To Terminus
Games · Kandpalbhaskar010