Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia

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UNK

A fanfic ? Without a doubt an original work, even though it takes place in a pre-made world it is great to see your own vision of this incredible world. I am a danmachi fan, I watched all the seasons and I am waiting for certain characters to appear.

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Kandpalbhaskar010

What i love most about the story is that, it's simple, precise and understandable. Conversations are well written. Background is well defined. Plot is well described. Not far away from Anime. Although i have only watched two seasons. Love to read more of it. Waiting for more updates.

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kuhaku_sora

Very interesting story (fanfiction)! I haven't watch the anime or read the lightnovel of damnachi. But this novel explains a lot (I dunno. for me it has an original plot that I could follow). The only points i'd like to suggest are the passive voice misuse and adverbs (such as "who had been completely silent" and other lines in the chapters) adverbs are great, but sometimes an active verb does the job well! the same goes with the passive voice misuse! Kudos for the author~

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inklingparker

I got a bit confused (i haven't watched the anime yet) but wow I was able to get invested because of the quality of the writing. Sometimes it was jarring to see the different styles of words but I guess they were comedic

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MoYun_ZJ

A well-written story, with good dialogue and vivid characters. I was not familiar with Danmachi - but it made me want to go check out the original!

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ArthurCE10

Pretty good 👍 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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1AM

I don't know anything about the source (Danmachi -anime/manga). So, I am not properly introduced to the characters. But I can say, that the author had put a lot of effort into the dialogues and explaining how the characters feel. It took a lot of time for me to get through since I get nauseatic reading wordy paragraphs, but it was very very well written... that I can say😂

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ScarletCore

Top notch style. This doesn’t read like most fanfics would expect to, it has a feeling of originality. At first, I thought this was based on marvel, as I haven’t watched any of the shows, but this was proven false quickly. Having never watched the anime, so I can only assume the authors devotion to the series in order to produce a well-developing story like this. No bad Grammer or style mistakes from what I can make out, and the characters are well defined in first meeting. The novel gives the feeling that something big is going to happen soon, though I am yet to get to that part. Added to my library

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Anotoki

the writing quality is top quality possible ! Although this is a fan fiction, it's entertaining and enjoyable, your perspective to the danmachi world is quite unique and the way you tell the story interesting and well detailed.

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Slan

I like the way the story goes. ............. ... . . . . . . . ...................................... ..........................................................

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The_Paintrogrammer

I didnt watch The anime But i enjoyed a lot while reading chapters , all chapters well written 👏 and the characters also , you make me want to check the anime 😂 waiting more chapters and keep It up 😊

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d_nmalory

I am not familiar with the anime but with help from the many mythologies I am able to follow the plot. The author is also very expounding in the description and build up which makes reading this book enjoyable.

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Uragos

I have not watched the anime, but thanks to the author's style, you want to watch the anime while reading. It is a work with a simple and understandable explanation. I recommend reading while drinking coffee.

This book is very enjoyable. I love the way the plot, characters and settings do not strey to far from the anime. Great work author, I look foward to more chapters!

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Vitor_Gamer_Br

the hestoria is cool but this is an AU😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅

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Luzparadise_

five stars for you author! I really like this book, I'll add this story to my library! First of all, I fell in love right away with the first chapter, the first chapter is very well-written. I am in love with this, I watch danmachi and I really love Freya. All of the chapters are really well-written, the characters, settings... and the chapters are all long in which I know you took a long time doing, I appreciate your efforts. I enjoyed this so much, keep up the good work!!!

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ElisabethSuelli

I enjoyed this story, I'm not even in the fandom but I was able to understand what was going on. So give this story a read, you won't be disappointed.

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Adwaid_Nambiar

I love when someone uses mythology for their story and same goes with this. I liked the way everything was introduced without dragging out everything. I especially liked the pacing of this novel. And dialogues are also very well written, with only 4 chapters currently this is pretty good. Keep up the good work!

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REaper

I found the story to be quite interesting, even though I haven't watched the series, but the way I read the events, it should be interesting, and author has wrote really well .way to go author. Update regularly.