New author - Also a bear. \(°-°)/
2021-05-16 Joined United States
can you input something signifying a time skip or something... trying to read that really confused me as it came out of quite literally nowhere. If not that's fine too but it would help out quite dramatically for new readers.
ch 0 2 Actions make the person***
Anime & Comics · ZeOwl
still confused... wasn't poison doulou unable to even use his martial spirit because of MC's skill?
ch 118 Chapter 119 You Really Love Being the Good Person_1
Book&Literature · Bright Pupil
didnt even try to bargain... with the 'Grandmaster's' personality he would've heard him out. After all even though he's a tyrant, he dislikes trouble. And considering the MC's strength, it seems like unnecessary trouble to even suggest the first option. He'd at most present an accord(deal), for instance... "you clearly came here for a reason, seeing your strength and ruthless bloodshed, I have to ask what you're after. Whatever it is, with my ability I'm willing to exchange it assuming you work for me and if that isn't very interesting to you, then you can choose to fight in the arena against the champion... considering there's a current lack of contenders". That makes much more sense for his cunning and deceptive personality than just straight forward "do this or die". plus this is becoming more and more Chinese as we progress... 1000 catties? really? I have no issue with it, besides the fact you used different measurements originally. I also have to agree with a previous comment... this chapter is BEYOND forced... it's the equivalent of watching a non gamer play a game. Incredibly frustrating and you have to force yourself to endure it. Forgive my rant... I am currently in an annoyed state.
ch 186 IMUC-CHAPTER 185 THE GRANDMASTER’S CHOICE
Movies · DarkShadow95
... Is every iron related object going to be Iron-Man? I mean Iron-Man Door, Really? I've ignored it so far but it's quite literally every time Iron appears... love the novel, the way it's going is quite well. But I mean... it shouldn't be that hard to disassociate Iron-Man from iron objects.
ch 171 IMUC-CHAPTER 170 SAKAAR CHAMPIONSHIP FIGHT
Movies · DarkShadow95
kinda hoped he would've kept one alive to extract the German language from... would've helped him somehow I'm sure. like for instance eavesdropping on conversations or reading battle plans... etc.
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: Engaging in Battle and Killing Enemies.
Movies · DarkShadow95
never been to Thailand before?
Kasha's face was pale, had he really been condemned by the heavens?
Anime & Comics · wheretonow
that or translator is probably losing interest in this. thus lowering the quality.
"It is impossible for an ordinary battle body to reach the limit of the mortal body!".Localization
Eastern · A Sea Of Soup
computer code stuff, basically a mistake that was left in when this was created. (Written by an ai not a real person. some aspects might be original, however i had my suspicion and this has proven it.)
"It is impossible for an ordinary battle body to reach the limit of the mortal body!".Localization
Eastern · A Sea Of Soup
so the 30 points he gained from eliminating the 3 people from the enemy guild just don't exist I guess... alright... I guess it doesn't matter that much... my consistency will be forever thrown off while reading this but otherwise it's still pretty good.
ch 48 Unexpected Situation.
Fantasy · Seraphinn_
now at 90 points total... let's see if the author is consistent.
ch 46 Killing Spree I.
Fantasy · Seraphinn_
used the wrong name in this chapter during a fight. Long Fei is injured and lying on the ground, weaponless... you probably meant the MC, who has a short sword and is almost unrivaled in terms of speedy attacks... it also makes sense as the character that engages in combat with Shen Lun is standing in front of Long Fei.
ch 32 Uneven roads Will Be Leveled by Someone!
Eastern · Shadow Of The Moon
I mean, I understand that the MC is pretty much just grinding his death streak... but can all of the side character stuff NOT take so much space. I'd rather read the story of the MC instead of the story of every other thing happening in this world that has quite literally NO EFFECT on what's happening with the MC. To me, these past few "auction" chapters have been nothing but filler.
ch 27 Chapter27- The No.1 Player of Darklord's Guild
Fantasy · White_Ink
they meant irl.
For every wife he had, the system generated gold points.
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
can we not refer to a single character as "fresh meat" when quite literally ALL OF THEM are there to sign up... which would make ALL OF THEM "fresh meat" and even if they're already working for the military, who in their right mind would randomly harass a bystander, IN FRONT of a high ranking individual. even if she wasn't there, the fact remains that they're there to sign up, and pulling a stunt like that is basically just signing a death warrant during training if you happen to be put together... people hold grudges after all.
ch 0 3 Sign-In Combat Talent, Random Mission
Urban · Little Swallow Grass
went from suitcase computer to notebook computer... why?
ch 32 No Drone Can Escape Being Locked On
Sci-fi · Wolfberry is not Tasty
the only plot hole I've noticed so far is that they somehow know he got married... even though he didn't tell anyone, and there wasn't any sort of celebration... "oh well they might've discovered it when passing by the town they were at, or maybe have people spying on him." first option is unlikely as it was pretty much destroyed within an hour after they left, and the second one makes even less sense... who are they going to have under their control that can spy on a random alchemist if they're all low level cultivators. a human? well they would rather die than anger a cultivator they're unfamiliar with, so that's not plausible. even if it was a cultivator would notice something if they were being followed for that long. once again, nothing against it, I'm just really trying to figure it out. 😂😅🤔
ch 0 3 Immortal Cultivation Is the Only Way
Eastern · Little Overlord From Bamboo City
live explosives, aimed at high level personnel... and you tell me this is a drill? right... I guess killing high rank officers in a drill would make the practice more "effective"... Totally not cripple military operations for a while until a replacement is available, or hinder further training due to injury and lack of manpower...
ch 18 Operation: Beheading!
Urban · Three Feet Sharp
and yes I get that it's recording the past experiences of the writer, HOWEVER if I'm not mistaken, then it stated that it also contained cultivation techniques in it... which would indeed make it a cultivation manual.
There were many terms that Lin Bai did not understand in the book.
Action · Powerpuff Girl
I thought the system specifically told him when he first got it, that "assassinating those around the protagonist" was a way of going about things without directly killing the protagonist, thus not being affected by whatever dumb rules of the protagonists halo.
ch 0 9 Unpursued Heroine Ning Xian
Great Villain: Starting by Humiliating the Son of the Heavenly Fate
Eastern · AlphaWIA