A Weirdo, with bizarre interests, and Ideas that are tremendously tremendous
2021-05-21 Joined Canada
Yeah! I was trying to work my way around it, but I guess I didn't shorten it enough ill take a day to readvise it.
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The religious figures in the **book** are fictional
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Religious figures are fictional, and the use of the word 'God' is used all the time. But I understand your concern but I had that in mind when writing.
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That is the type of Honesty this app needs, the criticism that points out the things that needs change!, visually descriptive writing is not my strongest. And as for the dark part it's kind of slow but The main character Victoria is in conflict with herself as her past counterpart Artorias is beginning to make herself known. It'll become a fight between the two. That's just the beginning, I suppose I might have asked for my medicine to early. But I am trying to find a way to get past the whole "Victoria: says" and move into the "Blah blah yada yada said Victoria intently" type. The more i read the more I learn. The honesty is much appreciated your truly a Brother, a Brother Indeed!! When I ask people close to me or a stranger it's always the same. LIKE LET ME HAVE IT!!! people are way to nice. This is my dream job! I wanna get serious. Need the truth! You did me and my future a solid! [img=strong] I will grow from this!
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THANK YOU!!! THAT IS THE PURE Honesty I needed! Now back to the drawing board! [img=strong] feedback I can work with! Much a appreciated you sir are good friend! A good friend indeed!
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I don't even know if people read these reviews but I have a lot of passion for the Nibiru project. As known as Nibirius Souls today. I started back in 2017.
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Greetings!, I'm the Author. As you can tell I'm inexperienced when it comes to writing, but I have a story to tell. I've download Grammarly premium. So expect a better writing quality. My vision for Nibirius Souls is a telling of more than one story but of a several. Inspired by Hidetaka Miyazaki's Games and George Raymond Richard Martin. My Biggest Inspiration is the grim reality of life. My life, growing up in a difficult environment, with difficult circumstances. Life didn't give me a chance. My optimism and my escape through fantasy that being Video Games or other source of media, which has kept me going. Turning every boring and dark moment in reality into a fantasy journey... "Too old for Games" "Too Old For Anime" where something I heard often. But it all sums up to me not liking my position in life. One thing I wish I knew in my younger days was not to give two shits about what people think. Here I am.. Self educated. A man standing before readers and writers. Asking you to give my book a chance. If you see (Unedited) in the chapters. Save my book it in your collections and come back. I promise, you ill get it done. The fantastic epic of a tournament of reincarnationed Mains and Sides fighting to the death.. Follow My Big Bad Artorias's journey to becoming the Last Boss. Because your worst enemy is truly yourself..
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Your writing is pretty damn, good and descriptive!, there is the random mistake like "Save for one" went my mind read "Except for one" but it's done really well, I like where it's leading
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clearly descriptive writing, I'm very intrigued by the monsters. Now excuse me, shall continue!
ch 0 1 Time Is Of The Essence.
Fantasy · LanumKing
Lord Gold never fails to amaze me [img=update]
ch 35 Revelation
Sci-fi · LordGold556
Thank you! My growth has a lot to do with reading your guys' work, I don't just see you guys as authors, but as mentors.
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DaoistOfReading, you were completely right, I'm immersed, sucked into the book. it is a gift and curse finding a good book. I'll enjoy the heck out of your work, and for a moment, put down something important. [img=recommend]
ch 0 1 When Skies Turn Grey (1/2)
Fantasy · 1stDaoistOfReading
Okay, I'm 100 percent Invested. [img=recommend]
ch 0 3 2. The Escape: Unveiling the Mysteries of the Devil's Grin
Fantasy · Kaylon
The amount of vivid detail.. Poetry!
ch 0 1 Saltmarsh
Sci-fi · LordGold556
Yeah, a Balance in a system is important!, It been familiar makes it easier to understand, You're good, Brother, keep writing!
The ether that is outside is not harmful to anyone but if you absorb too much you could die from ether poisoning. once we fill our ether to a certain level we can now use an ether code
Fantasy · Alan_Grimlord
I'll find a way around it. I'll learn and adapt, Thank you for such kind words. I appreciate it, sincerely.