Webnovel Author: Sal_TarLeen - Novel Collection

I started reading and found myself at chapter 7. It truly captured my attention. Henderson is disgusting, I hope Cassey does not grow up like him.

I love the story. Lisa is more frank than I expected, I like how clear the characters ideas are shown and the fast pace of the events. Shane seemed dark for real though. but Lisa should be wiser for her age, Lol

An interesting idea, and a strange plot so far. I think the paragraphs need short sentences and one can use the word (one) instead of he/she. Maybe you can add a bit of emotion to the characters in their time of crisis or when making hard choices. But so far, it's great on the science side, just try to put it in shorter sentences so the concept becomes clearer for your everyday readers. Go on!👍🏻😃

thanks for the advice ☺️. Really appreciate it

thank you! I will update today or tomorrow 🌹😃

happy you got the feelings I tried to embody in my words, wait for more 🥰😉

thank you very much 🥰 I hope it reaches out to all🌹