Thanks for the feedback. I'm trying to avoid characters giving exposition that doesn't make sense for the characters to be saying, like the brothers explaining their history to each other as they already know each others histories. I'm also trying to keep a layer of intrigue and mystery for a bit, I think it doesn't make sense for some of the characters to be able to work out certain things, but the answers will come. I will try to make changes to explain everything in the right place
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Thanks for the feedback. I'm trying to avoid characters giving exposition that doesn't make sense for the characters to be saying, like the brothers explaining their history to each other as they already know each others histories. I'm also trying to keep a layer of intrigue and mystery for a bit, I think it doesn't make sense for some of the characters to be able to work out certain things, but the answers will come. I will try to make changes to explain everything in the right place
ch 0 2 Chapter 2. Mortal enemies
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