Webnovel Author: gbaquero - Novel Collection

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4mth

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I like how the story begins with the process of reincarnation rather than showing the previous life. It's breath of fresh air from all the other reincarnation-type novels. The development of the first chapter is good and you're left with intrigue as well. Would read.

Imperial Eunuch

Fantasy · Luninu

gbaquero

4mth

Posted

Honestly, couldn't find a big flaw to note as a reader, nor anything that itched me too hard. The setting, although a bit simple, it's gripping. The system of Super Senses is very intriguing and unique, and the character is the best part of them all. The MC feels alive with every word he mutters. The first chap is perfectly done, I loved how the author handled the emotions there. And the writing style is just perfect, it flows very well with the story. Without a doubt a great novel to read!

Modern Monster

Fantasy · SenTheSenseless

gbaquero

6mth

Posted

You know how this works, yet another shameless author 5/5 review. Welcome to Blood Hunter! If you are a fan of Hell-like settings and a plot revolving around Hell and Heaven, then you are in for a wild ride. Some basic things in case you need to confirm some specifics. - [Quick summary]: Hell has broken into Earth and Heaven is helping Humans survive. Bloodhunters, half-demons // half-humans, are the target of both Humans and Angels, which includes Azrael, the MC. A fast-paced narrative of how a nobody managed to get himself into a war with Heaven itself and tries to survive! - [Writing Style]: My writing style excels at dialogue but I'm also practicing my describing techniques. So expect a lot of dialogue and (hopefully) understandable descriptions! - [World or Emotion Focus?]: Expect a lot of emphasis on the character's emotions, development, and backstory! While I'll also put extreme caution on a detailed world and plot, I'll try to make interesting and not shallow characters. This includes secondary characters. - [MC's personality]: Azrael just woke up as a Bloodhunter without any memories of his past life. He is a kind person who tries to light the mood at any time, by jokes or messing around. However, if things get serious, he can adopt a more cold and calculating facade. This 180º change will be explained in the future! So read the book :D - [Themes and Atmosphere]: The book is extremely inspired by Dante's Inferno and fast-paced games. It has a dark tone that makes its way into each Circle of Hell and its effect on the Humans/Bloodhunters wandering inside. At the same time, it will contain moments of absurd comedy to ease that blow. I hope that you like reading this book as much as I like writing it! Will be waiting for your comments and reviews, any constructive criticism will be accepted with open arms. If you are here to throw shit, then expect radio silence on my part ;) Enjoy the book!

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gbaquero

6mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

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Dark Magus Returns

Fantasy · JKSManga

gbaquero

6mth

Posted

It's a pretty good novel. The only thing the author needs to work on is the story's pacing. Sometimes it feels too fast and you may get lost. Other than that, I do believe that the story has the potential to become something big if that sole problem gets solved. Has good grammar, a great idea behind the world-building, and the MC is likable! Don't give up, author! We learn from our mistakes after all. Have a nice writing and may your novel prosper! ;)

Deviant Devil

Fantasy · Kexer

gbaquero

6mth

Replied to gbaquero

Also, any extra questions make sure to comment them here and I'll answer as fast as I can!

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gbaquero

2yr

Replied to Bryson99

The MC wasn't even born during the war. He is born way after these events, like hundred of thousands of years later.

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gbaquero

2yr

Replied to Bryson99

I've been thinking of the plot for a long time and it ended up being somewhat similar to it. It will get it's own pace the moment he gets the mist bottles dont worry. The start was probably the hardest thing to execute, because there wasn't too many options to make it look realistic, but yeah later own it will have it's own changes.

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