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Nice! If you give a system don't make him OP too fast. The story start becoming bland when, not if, the MC solve everything without effort. Just give him a system that show him his stats. And please just one devil fruit and don't remove the weaknesses. Sorry I'm ranting, but your story seems great, so don't become a generic system-wish fulfilling-harem-100 devil fruits-Gary stu fic. And for the love of God don't make the system some king of summoning system, to bring object or people into the world. The Mc wants to live freely, if his own family, other pirates, marines, IMU and the world government start chasing him his whole life because of his powers(because even devil fruits can't explain everything)

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Here is chapter 6 from fanfiction.net : Chapter 6: Team building and trust It's been two days since our first mission in Santa Prisca. I've been busy making more of my suits, already designing the Mark 46 armor, and interacting with my team more. Since I left a message for the Light on the threat that I would shut them down, I've been doing everything I can to help this team for when we face them and other threats. I've been thinking about changing the teams original name of Young Justice. Though I'm not sure if I should. Anyway, I've also been designing suits for my team but I need more information on their powers before I can finish them. It's possible that they are only scratching the surface with their abilities and they need to only to learn their full potential. The Light will definitely be more focused on me than the others since I know who they are and what they are trying to do. I really do admire their goal for human evolution but there is too much risk. Too many lives to be sacrificed. That is why they need to be stopped. Pretty soon, Superboy will have another confrontation with Superman and I think it's time I give him the self confidence he needs when he does. I see Superboy watching television in the main hall of the mountain. He's watching the news about Superman saving civilians from a burning building in Metropolis and putting the fire out with his Artic Breath. I really don't think it's fair that this guy has so many powers. He's practically a god. Too much power for one person to have. Jesus I sound like Bruce. I see Superboy's face that shows a mixture sadness and anger. I walk up to him "Hey Superboy, you doing ok?" I ask He looks up at me "I'm fine" he answers. He's not fine But I rather not risk going to the hospital if I told him that. "So I've been thinking of a name for you" I said to him "A name?" Superboy asks "Yeah a name. We all have one except for you and I can tell that it's been bothering you not having an identity you could call your own." I explained to him. He nods in understanding but is more depressed about being reminded that he's a clone. "So what name did you think of?" He asks me with a curious gaze. I grin "Well I was thinking of Connor as your human name and I've also thought of something for your kryptonian name but I wanted to see what you thought of the former before I told you the latter." I told him. "Connor" he repeats and has a thoughtful expression. He smiles at this "Yeah I like that but what do you mean about a Kryptonian name?" He asks "Superman's real name is Kal-El, but when he is not in uniform he is Clark Kent, journalist for the Daily Planet. Don't tell anyone though" Connor nods his head "I was thinking of Kon-El with a K. Its the only thing I could think of that could fit. You are half kryptonian and deserve to have a name to prove your heritage." "What do you mean half-kryptonian?" He asks me "I'm his clone shouldn't I be a full kryptonian?" I debate on telling him anymore for I'm not sure how he would handle the truth. Just imagine believing that you are one thing your entire life and then be told one day that you were something else entirely. It could be devastating to someone. "Are you sure you want to know?" I ask him and he looks at me with determination "I do" he said to me. I nod my head reluctantly and tell him what I know. I take out my phone and show a screen of information as I talk. "Ever since we helped you escape Cadmus, the files regarding your creation were heavily encrypted. It took me and Friday a while to decrypt them piece by piece. When we were able to decrypt them, we noticed that there were numerous files suggesting you were not the only clone they made. In fact, you are most likely the one successful clone they had at Cadmus while the rest died or were sent somewhere else for further experimentation." He looks at me with shock but let's me continue "According to the files, you certainly do have Superman's

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It's Dazzler! The mutant pop star!

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