MIDO999

MIDO999

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MIDO999
MIDO999
19 hours ago
Replied to TheGoon187

who?

'Yeah, no, it's not a system that terrorises me, it's a system that's asking me to terrorise.'

Marvel: Terror Stream

Marvel: Terror Stream

Anime & Comics · Marveller

MIDO999
MIDO999
3 days ago
Posted

The plot is good, but the AI ​​makes the writing style poetic and exaggerated, such as repeatedly adding words like "absolute" and "fate," making the sentences overly poetic and exaggerated, and repeating the same sentences over and over again. You're writing the paragraphs little by little, and you're having it improve the writing style and correct the grammar, right? It's better to tell it to correct the grammar while keeping the text unchanged. Trust me, that's better. I've reached the section part and that's ruined the story for me.

MIDO999
MIDO999
3 days ago
Commented

Guys, let's put the racism aside. I'm neither American nor Chinese, and I prefer Chinese and Japanese barbecue restaurants to any other barbecue restaurant.

There might not be much barbecue in America, but there were always Chinese barbecue places. This was not some small town. This was New York.

Transmigrated into The Boys, Starting as Soldier Boy

Transmigrated into The Boys, Starting as Soldier Boy

TV · Pink_Snake2

MIDO999
MIDO999
3 days ago
Posted

The way the AI ​​is being used is very clear. Please tell it not to change its writing style, and please don't write paragraphs that are only one to five words long. Nobody likes to read something like that. The plot of this novel is truly interesting., and I haven't read Fallen Piece before, and the fact that the MC has no connection to Koh is something I rarely see in a novel, then please don't ruin your work with AI. I will delete this review and write another one when the writing style of the novel improves.

MIDO999
MIDO999
3 days ago
Posted

The novel absolutely deserves five stars.

MIDO999
MIDO999
MIDO999
4 days ago
Commented

this chapter is so fucken peak. damn to this little sand in my eyes

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MIDO999
MIDO999
4 days ago
Replied to CoatLoverTL

same

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Afterward, the world observation officially came to an end.

JJK: The Culling Game

JJK: The Culling Game

Anime & Comics · Nqksuu

MIDO999
MIDO999
6 days ago
Posted

Please don't write only two to five words per paragraph; nobody likes reading text like that.

MIDO999
MIDO999
6 days ago
Commented

+1