The plot is good, but the AI makes the writing style poetic and exaggerated, such as repeatedly adding words like "absolute" and "fate," making the sentences overly poetic and exaggerated, and repeating the same sentences over and over again. You're writing the paragraphs little by little, and you're having it improve the writing style and correct the grammar, right? It's better to tell it to correct the grammar while keeping the text unchanged. Trust me, that's better. I've reached the section part and that's ruined the story for me.
Guys, let's put the racism aside. I'm neither American nor Chinese, and I prefer Chinese and Japanese barbecue restaurants to any other barbecue restaurant.
There might not be much barbecue in America, but there were always Chinese barbecue places. This was not some small town. This was New York.
TV · Pink_Snake2
The way the AI is being used is very clear. Please tell it not to change its writing style, and please don't write paragraphs that are only one to five words long. Nobody likes to read something like that. The plot of this novel is truly interesting., and I haven't read Fallen Piece before, and the fact that the MC has no connection to Koh is something I rarely see in a novel, then please don't ruin your work with AI. I will delete this review and write another one when the writing style of the novel improves.
The novel absolutely deserves five stars.
this chapter is so fucken peak. damn to this little sand in my eyes
same
Afterward, the world observation officially came to an end.
Anime & Comics · Nqksuu
Please don't write only two to five words per paragraph; nobody likes reading text like that.
+1
1) Boa hancock.
Anime & Comics · Asura_Tatsu
who?
'Yeah, no, it's not a system that terrorises me, it's a system that's asking me to terrorise.'
Marvel: Terror Stream
Anime & Comics · Marveller