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Anytime, nev!
Thank you! I’ll try my best on this book as my others! 🥰
Thank you so much! This really touched me🥰
Thank you so much for the continued support!
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Fantasy · TheSpixa
Thank you maam for the nice review! 😌
Here are my thoughts! The book has an interesting plot and could garner a crowd of readers with just the content. There are some issues regarding the excessive paragraphing. Usually, to cut off a paragraph is used to cut a scene or introduce a sudden action or a different topic. Furthermore, you tend to leave a run-on sentence or start a sentence without a subject. “Walking towards the wooden wardrobe.” Is an example. Unlike other languages, English is usually written as “Subject- verb- object”. However, you frequently leave out the subject. Other than that, your book would be a very marketable idea: You have little spelling or vocabulary issues and your occasional usage of sensory vocabulary improves the flow of the book. Keep writing, author! :)
The Forgotten Wings
Fantasy · Yogurt_Garcia