thanks for the chapter and am glad you can take the criticism and improve by the way you called the dragonair dragonite a couple of times
ch 25 Chapter 25 Anti-Climatic Battle and the Plan
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ty for the chapter
ch 24 Chapter 24 Holding a Hostage and Scott Goodwin
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thanks for the chapter love that last line
ch 23 Chapter 23 Plan for a Lab and Abner Flag
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thanks for the suprise upload
ch 22 Chapter 22 The Return and a Situation
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all good thanks for the info
ch 22 Chapter 22 The Return and a Situation
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thanks for the chapter and it looked fine to me
ch 21 Chapter 21 Kyle's Resolve and The Applin Challenge
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love it thanks for the chapter
ch 20 Chapter 20 A Loss and Faust's Vengeance
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thanks for the chapter
ch 19 Chapter 19 Overlord Sylveon and the Battle
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thanks for the chapter
ch 18 Chapter 18 The Mind over the Heart and A Surprise
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Kyle turned to Kyle
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ch 17 Chapter 17 Out of Ideas and Articuno's Request
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love it the characters seam real and the world feels alive the monsters are creative and the power system is simple well all so being expansive the wrighting is great the new chapters are the highlight of my day 10/10
Sword God in a World of Magic
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