Webnovel Author: Roopa_sree - Novel Collection

2yr

Posted

The concept of your story is fresh as the world background is quite interesting with the different countries and creatures. The sentences can be shorter as writing long sentences make it confusing.The character background is quite good but I hope more information is given as the story progresses!Overall great story:)

The Dream Saga

Fantasy · wookie0_

Roopa_sree

2yr

Commented

The description is AWESOMEEE

The sun shone with gentle radiance, melting the fog and casting a breath of vitality into the biodiversity. Dairy trucks drove on the vacant streets, delivering packets of milk to each household. A newspaper boy pedalled his bicycle, carrying a bundle of newspapers behind him.

Psychic Parasite

Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus

Roopa_sree

2yr

Posted

I really liked the description of every action and how you got into the details but not too much of it.I was able to visualise the actions of the characters.The story has an unique concept!

Psychic Parasite

Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus

Roopa_sree

2yr

Posted

It is a unique idea to start of with and the plot is really interesting.Quick to read and the language is quite good.Great Job! Maybe longer chapters?