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ch 0 1 Prologue: Echoes of a Cosmic Clash

The Sun and Sea

The Sun and Sea

Urban · Xairou

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looking down her nose, looking arrogantly at her

One of the women raised her eyes and looked at Fang Ya with her nostrils. "Discipline Inspection Commission!"

After Getting Abandoned, I Choose to Become the General’s Wife

After Getting Abandoned, I Choose to Become the General’s Wife

Urban · JQK

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*her chin

"Yes! That's right! How is it?" Lu Ping raised his chin and looked at Fang Ya.

After Getting Abandoned, I Choose to Become the General’s Wife

After Getting Abandoned, I Choose to Become the General’s Wife

Urban · JQK

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finally using "implicate" correctly

As an ambitious inspector, he wouldn't allow any pieces of trash to harm his country's soldiers. Even if the person had a special background, he would be impartial in his investigation. He wouldn't let anyone escape the punishment of the law. This major was excited because such complaints from the frontline normally meant that there was a big case. It might even implicate some high-status officers in the military. This was a chance for him to perform.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

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I keep seeing "implicated" when the better translation would be "impacted"

"Commander-in-chief, the higher authorities have given us an order to end the battle on Planet Wangjiao within half a year. This long battle had severely implicated the economy of the Hailiya Alliance, causing it to remain stagnant for more than 10 years. The political party is pressuring us to not drag this war any longer." His adviser, Jia Miao, who was beside him, was looking at the map intently too. If they were unable to end this war in half a year, they would have to face all kinds of accusations and undergo all kinds of investigations. They might even be pushed out to take the blame for their superiors for their faults.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

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that's not what a prodigal son is

This feeling of being looked down upon made Zhuge Jingming feel extremely humiliated. From his birth, he was the prodigal son. He was expected to inherit the next generation of the existence of the God Machine. Up until now, his life had been entirely smooth sailing. He was valued by his family and friends, and even the proud Jiang Shaoyu had no choice but to yield to him… This had made Zhuge Jingming become conceited, believing that there was no one in the world that would look down upon him.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

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sounds like a cult leader

Since shouldering the role of vice regiment commander, Shi Mingyi had used the resources of the Tianji Mecha Clan quite often to seek out information on all the fair-faced youths in the various specializations. Of course, he was cunning about it — those with substantial family backgrounds, he would not dare to touch; he typically went after those from common stock, or those students without very significant backgrounds. One after another over the past year, there had already been five or six youths who had fallen into his wicked hands. And now, these victims had all become team members in his fold, holding him in extraordinary love and admiration, loyal to a fault.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

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these last 2 sentences have so much impact.

I addressed Rashta, and then looked to Sovieshu. Although he wanted me to give a blessing, Sovieshu did not look happy, as if he suspected I had hidden a knife in my sleeves or skirt. But I did not hide knives in my clothes. I hid them in my tongue.

Remarried Empress (English)

Remarried Empress (English)

Anime & Comics · agatharoza

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that's not what a freuidan slip is.

"But she said that she wouldn't..." Feng Xiuyu began then bit her tongue, regretting her Freudian slip. She quickly salvaged the situation by saying, "Big Sister said that she's busy. I'm afraid she might not turn up."

The Tempestuous Consort - Wilfully Pampered by the Beastly Highness

The Tempestuous Consort - Wilfully Pampered by the Beastly Highness

Fantasy · Wearing High Heels For You

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if the head has been severed from the body how is it howling?

In the throes of death, the python seemed to be in great pain. It split its mouth open wide in a howling cry to the heavens. After a long ear-splitting wail, the snake head finally fell heavily to the ground once more, sending yet another spray of dust and dirt into the air.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

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the influence of number 5 and 3 showing here

After the little hand pushed away his fingers, it lightly patted his cheek. The initially icy and youthful little face of his opponent actually shifted into a smile. The smile was sweet and lovely, making Xiao Chong feel as if he had seen the sun, blindingly radiant yet so warm that people yearned for it.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

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