Aspiring author. Creator of Legends of the Arcane and King's Gambit.
2021-06-09 Joined United States
This excerpt takes place in the middle of the novel. After reading your comment I'm reevaluating the buildup to this scene, as I understand it could come across as sudden. To show that it takes place later on in the story I edited the title of the chapter to reflect that. Thanks for the critique. I'm going to take this into account :D
"Please don't kill me!"
Fantasy · ArcherLUL
literally shut up
ch 0 3 Chapter 1: Luca
Legends of the Arcane: The Storm Crown
Fantasy · ArcherLUL