It's good, I loved it. Needs a little proofreading and some editing. Overall It's a perfect, cute and adoring story. Keep it up and good luck for the next story.
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It's good, I loved it. Needs a little proofreading and some editing. Overall It's a perfect, cute and adoring story. Keep it up and good luck for the next story.
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Teen · NIVA_P