This is the author,please give feedback on the novel and what you think of it so far and if you wanna see something in it later on.Ik its pretty vauge so far but i feel like it would turn into a sick novel.
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Fantasy · Arif_207
comment what you think so far what yu wanna see
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Fantasy · Arif_207
let me know your thoughts of this prologue ik its pretty vague so far but i can guarentee this will be a sick novel.
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Fantasy · Arif_207
Overall, this is quite an enjoyable read. The writing is understandable although there are rare instances where there are mistakes. The story develops at a nice rate and the character design is pretty good as well. I personally, don't like having to read about all the races at the beginning, but that's just me. Overall, its a great novel and keep doing you thing it seems like its gonna work out for you.
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Action · CalmDaoistLee