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Fantasy · halfblinde
I’m going to support my own work and say that it’s worth a read! I’m a native english speaker, so the grammar isn’t half bad. I try to stick to conventional means of dialogue as well. The worldbuilding might be a little choppy, but the characters memorable and likable. Please give this novel a chance! (:
I enjoyed this novel a lot! The writing is well done, the syntax was crazy good, and it really had a great hand into making the world much more interesting! I hope the novel will continue, good luck!
Fantasy · _Rain
My only true geope with this novel is the grammar and the way it was written. It was hard to go through at first, but the plot and the characters really do make up for it. I hope there’s some kind of editor that helps pick up on this, since I did like the story.
Fantasy · Itsuki_Suzuki
Thank goi for your review! <3 I’ll try my best to improve the worldbuilding!
I genuinely enjoy what I've read so far. The grammar is well-written, so it's easy to read. The pacing is well done, though the beginning is a bit confusing, I'm sure that's just a matter of "It will be uncovered later". The characters are interesting, especially the demon character, who seems to have interesting motives. I also really like the "gray" parts of the story. If anyone is considering giving this a read, I'd really recommend it. [img=recommend]
Fantasy · val_the_mysterious
Thank you for your kind review! 🙂
The pacing is great! I really enjoy the plot, since it’s the type of book I like to read. The characters are memorable and enjoyable, especially Dhruv. The plot is engaging, so I would really reccomend anyone to read this.
Horror · Adwaid_Nambiar
I thoroughly enjoyed this novel! The writing, syntax, and author’s voice are very pleasant to read. The pacing and worldbuilding are nicely done, in my opinion. The characters are also very well done! I would definitely reccomend giving this novel a try.
Sci-fi · EJMackey
Thank you! :)
I will work on the pacing, so that it’s at a better pace. Thank you for your review and advice! 🙂
I really did enjoy the novel so far! First and foremost, the representation of autism is fantastic. The author also went out of their way to provide definitions to clarify anything that the reader may not be familiar with. The writing is fantastically done. Many webnovels have the issue of grammatical errors, but I have seen none with this one so far! The descriptions and authors voice are beautifully done. I woukd reccomend this 10/10!
LGBT+ · SEP1A
The characters are fun, and the MC is quite memorable amongst the rest of the cast. The beginning is a little bit confusing, as there’s quite a bit of information to take in. But the author’s writing style makes it a relaxing read.
Fantasy · Mayemura
Thank you for your review! I’m glad you enoyed it, especially the characterization! (:
The novel is very easy to read with good flow and pacing. Though a lot of people may think the concept isn’t entirely unique, it’s executed much better than majority of any other similar novels. The MC is refreshing and the world building is done beautifully, without it feeling like too much. I hope to read more soon.
Fantasy · kuhaku_sora
Thank you for the review! I hope I can continue it well. :)
The start of the novel was actually REALLY well done. My only gripe was the extreme exposition dump that came almost immediately after. I felt a little dreadful after that, sure, but I continued to read and really liked the narration and the tone of the book overall. The characters do get a little jumbled up and confused in my head, but I'm never really good at memorizing characters unless they have extremely distinctive features, so take that as you will. I personally enjoyed the worldbuilding, but I also felt that it was a little too similar to make other novels that I have read before. Despite such, I did like what I read so far, and I hope you continue to write this novel.
Sci-fi · ujjwalanushka34
I really did enjoy the novel so far! It's humorous, has decent pacing, and is generally lighthearted. A lot of novels similar to this one tend to have perfect MCs who can do no wrong, but the MC here is unique in his own way, and isn't like the cliché perfect protagonists. The only 'issue' is the grammar, but even then, it's not so bad. If you overlook that, the story is a great read and I'd definitely recommend anyone interested to give it a read.
Urban · REaper
Thank you for your review! The synopsis is rather quick and short, but I'll work to improve it soon! :)
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Fantasy · halfblinde