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LV 1

halfblinde

I’m going to support my own work and say that it’s worth a read! I’m a native english speaker, so the grammar isn’t half bad. I try to stick to conventional means of dialogue as well. The worldbuilding might be a little choppy, but the characters memorable and likable. Please give this novel a chance! (:

LV 3

star_dreamer

Welps! This story is so mysterious and intriguing. The plot is so unique and engaging. The writing is realistic and hilarious at times. Definitely a good read, do try it! Kudos author, for a job well done!

LV 3

Itsuki_Suzuki

Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more chapters.

LV 13

val_the_mysterious

Enjoying the story so far! World building is still foggy, there isn’t a clear explination on the differences in hair and eye color, but its also still early in the storyline. Writing is good, characters are enjoyable. I feel for Lilith and what shes having to deal with. Can’t wait to see how the story progresses. Magenta better watch out!

LV 1

Adwaid_Nambiar

Writer has done a great job at this novel, its very engaging. And main character is really interesting. Dialogues are also very well written and funny. There aren't much chapters at this time but even with limited chapters it's a really good read. And I am looking forward to upcoming chapters.

LV 10

SEP1A

I’ve had this novel in my library, desperately waiting to review it. I am in love with the story’s cover! It reminds me of a book from my childhood (painted me in nostalgia, a fine thing in my opinion). Reading the story, I can almost feel the author’s brain working to produce this fine piece of art. By Chapter Three, I was assured that this was a lovely story. Your use of descriptives is absolutely amazing, my favourite line being “mismatched colours and worn out clothing and carpet” or a line to that extent. Brilliant imagery 💚 I would only suggest to go at a more moderate pace (faster) in order for the reader to constantly be engaged in your story. However, this is totally up to you - your world is under your control ✨

LV 3

kuhaku_sora

The writing style and plot is very engaging and immersive! The main protagonist is really funny at times (especially the dialogue!) Definitely will keep this inside my library~

LV 4

REaper

Well, a new and interesting concept, since the novel has just started it can be developed into a very interesting read. Hoping for the best author.

LV 3

Proteety_Promi

The story has potential. It's well written with a smooth pace which is a plus point. Though I think the synopsis can be improved if you work on it. It's just my opinion. Feel free to disagree.

LV 1

ItsAll_Lost

Pretty good for a first chapter! So far the story flow allows me to be curious about what might happen next. Im not quite sure about the rules of the world and its entirety but im sure you’ll be able to deliver all the answers to my questions! Keep writing! Im looking forward to future chapters :))

LV 14

PurpleLight

This novel has an interesting plot. And I like your writing style. Overall I like it. I hope to read more... keep up the good work author. cheers 😘👌👩‍💻

LV 11

_Rain

The story is really funny and hilarious at times. I love the plot and the writing style is simple with no grammar errors. Waiting for more chapters. Good luck, Author