Webnovel Author: SAU - Novel Collection

I don't know about others but I see a good potential in the novel but the reviews are way overrated I am not saying that the novel is bad but come on it looks like the author has reviewed his own novel from different accounts. But I would like to read more and the quality of the chapters could be improved

My review after reading till the 9th chapter though the author is newbie I can see he is trying his best to meet our expectations and the story is well built and the twists are very good. But it's still the beginning and I want to know what Dual Personality and unstable mind mean in his status.

I don't own this novel completely i read it and found that it has very great potential but the author wasted it by introducing useless cliches in between and turning the character development in the most stupid way possible. So i wanted to satisfy myself bt rewriting it into a better story i hope you guys can support me in this mission. And if the author is reading this i want to tell you that you are very good author and I apologise for stealing your work but i hope you can let me try making this work into a better piece that can be loved by everyone. Thank You ❣️