Knights are really so brave and strong
"It's not too serious, princess" Rowry assured, his voice, deep and gentle. "I've had wounds much worse"
Fantasy · Hank_moses
Yeah, I feel that too...A single strike from a giant beast is enough to destroy a ship in no time.
Viera looked at him with concern, for there was another crash to evade, as she feared that even a single hit from such a creature could finally sink the ship.
Fantasy · Hank_moses
Reading this, I felt like I'm right there witnessing all these chilling moments with the crew. Wow...I'm loving it❤️
It had been a full minute since the last blast from the cannons. The black trident's crew had spent every moment since then reloading, rearming themselves with long spears, and watching the sea for signs of the beast's return. All eyes were glued to the horizon, hoping for a glimpse of something other than the dark void ahead. The wind howled and whistled across the deck, while the cannons continued to spit fire into the water. No matter where the beast went, it was sure to come back with more ferocity. Thiles knew this; it wasn't his first time at sea.
Fantasy · Hank_moses
Thanks a lot !!! 💜😊
Thank you so much 🥰🥰
Your simplicity of using simple and nice words makes it even more beautiful!!! 🥰♡♡
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Is he Dead?
Teen · Account_nolonger
I liked it, it's so descriptive and detailed. I'll be back for chapter 2😊♡
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
Fantasy · Hank_moses
Yeah, face your fear, your fear will fear you!
"We cannot turn back now" Rowry said. "As the princess said, we need to stay on course. We'll smash it up against the rocks. That thing's got the speed of a bullet, but not the brains of a bird. Stay calm, men, it will be over soon. Now, keep the cannons loaded, and prepare to fire at the slightest movement!"
Fantasy · Hank_moses
Yeah, this kinda of rule should be abolished
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Fantasy · Hank_moses
Umm...yeah that's obvious...
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Fantasy · Hank_moses
Whoa😨
Then came the rattle of the chain links, the clink of metal rings, and a sudden splash of cold water. A massive head broke the surface of the water, only inches away from the starboard rail. Its jaws opened wide, revealing rows of jagged, pointed teeth, like a dragon's fangs. Then the monster snapped shut, and with a loud crunch, the waves sent The black tridents' masts flying.
Fantasy · Hank_moses
Wait...Did the beast picka boo them?
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Fantasy · Hank_moses
Wow, I must say... your writing style is really cool. It's like I'm watching a movie. everything is very descriptive
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Fantasy · Hank_moses
This beast is quite scary...😬
Sir Rowry had no response but to silently nod to his squad to steel themselves for what the beast planned next.
Fantasy · Hank_moses
Choosing a path different from your parents helps you, see the reality of this world...
"Mosasaurus, Sir! Don't think that volley is going to put it down just yet either..." The golden haired knight replied, sounding uncharacteristically bold as he helped a knight on the starboard bow load another cannonball. There was not a sea critter thiles did not know, he grew up at sea having sailors as parent, but he chose to be a knight instead.
Fantasy · Hank_moses
Well, the writing quality is just flawless. The story building is so nice that I felt like I was there. Honestly, I loved it.😊😊
The Crown's Heir
Fantasy · Hank_moses