XyphXIII

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XyphXIII
XyphXIII
8 days ago
Posted

Enjoyed the story up until chapter 90 ish. There are quite a few inconsistencies that are irritating. Another fic with the op child prodigy who is op as all hell at 11 years old after training for a small ammount of time. if that bothers you dont read it. spoilers below The whole point of having the story take place in the world of fairy tail. is to interact with and take part in the story of fairy tail after 100 chapters the main cast of the show is still another 6 ish years from joining fairytail let alone being relevant to the plot. Literally zero relevant timeskips. author could have very easily time skipped a couple times to show the main character develop his abilities more. Laxus in canon achieves S class at 17 years old an already incredible feat. but here laxus is basically S class at 10 and already 4th strongest in the guild. How tf does that make any kind of sense. I was very much looking forward to Oberon fighting acknologia on tenrou island during natsus S class trial because thats his whole character. but considering we are at chapter 100 natsu isnt even in the timeline yet AND MC HAS ALREADY BEEN OFFERED THE TITEL OF WIZARD SAINT AT 9 FUUUUUC KING YEARS OLD. i'll check back in around chapter 2000 to see if we have gotten to the 7 year time skip or not. by that time oberon should be strong enough to one shot acknologia.

XyphXIII
XyphXIII
10 days ago
Commented

nah I think this is a mistake makarov and mavis wouldnt let a 8-9 year old compete regardless of how strong. we needed a timeskip

XyphXIII
XyphXIII
11 days ago
Commented

in the og canon laxus didnt become s class till 17 idk i think this is moving kinda fast

XyphXIII
XyphXIII
11 days ago
Commented

feel like we could use a time skip here

XyphXIII
XyphXIII
11 days ago
Commented

I am so excited to see how this relationship affects laxus

"I know you will, that is how I raised you after all, that is how Fairy Tail works, by caring for each other," Makarov smiles, proud of his grandson. "Now, how about you go get ready for your first official Job..." 

Fairy Tail: Oberon (Fairy Tail Fanfiction)

Fairy Tail: Oberon (Fairy Tail Fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene

XyphXIII
XyphXIII
11 days ago
Commented

Laxus just watched his grandpa murder a kid

XyphXIII
XyphXIII
11 days ago
Commented

on the one hand goddamn thats awful. on the other hand if acnologia showed up this is exactly what would happen. well written

To witness his father's life and Magic shatter as if it were nothing, to watch the winds and debris tear his father and sister apart and scatter them as red mist.

Fairy Tail: Oberon (Fairy Tail Fanfiction)

Fairy Tail: Oberon (Fairy Tail Fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene

XyphXIII
XyphXIII
11 days ago
Commented

awwww

"Just because, it's a big world out there, be a shame if you only flew around our little village..."

Fairy Tail: Oberon (Fairy Tail Fanfiction)

Fairy Tail: Oberon (Fairy Tail Fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene

XyphXIII
XyphXIII
12 days ago
Commented

meh interesting concept but i dont care for the mc or the pacing or the dialogue

XyphXIII
XyphXIII
12 days ago
Commented

if he took only jobs that paid 150,000 and did 4 a month it would be 7.2mil a year. so definitly doable by his own math. author should grab a calculator before he just says stuff

He couldn't earn that much even if he worked desperately for a year without eating or drinking.

Fairy Tail: Anime Character Gacha

Fairy Tail: Anime Character Gacha

Anime & Comics · Alex_002