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You shouldn't put multiverse level characters into DXD, and the [plot] is too predictable. The main character is too much of a self-insert and self fulfilling [character].

Interesting fact, when Issei became adult, he also affected by salary man syndrome like Naruto too, kind of funny isn't it?

Reincarnated person, Supreme harem system, Dxd, reincarnated as Raiser, wow, it is all overused generics in one, let me guess, Mc gonna huliminate, fuck Issei up and kill him then take boosted gear and then go around collecting girls around like a Pokémon? I don't want to point all of this out but this definitely not a great start.

Really? Chapter 6 look normal to me though, not that I complain about it because it damn hard to find fanfics where it doesn't ruined Issei characters and turn him into scum.

Yeah, Everyone in Rias peerage are training hard everyday...well, atleast Issei and Kiba have been confirmed to training everyday so everyone else should be the same with those two right?

Which chapter you talking about?

Not a single characters likable in this story, especially Rias, she is such a bitch and deserve to be burn, seriously i find her character becoming more and more disgusting with each chapters.

Everything always gone to Riser's way without any setbacks, he should had some struggle unless you want story to become predictable, seriously this type of Mc starting to get old here.

Richter is too powerful for Dxd universe to handle him and render this story uninteresting, his kind of characters more suitable with the like of Marvel or Dc.

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