ThunderWolf_God - Profile

Besides the updating quality everything is perfect, what if as he grows more powerful the goddesses flock to him that way the harem aspect is not rushed you know one at a time that slowly builds it up that way the mc can manage such a large group of women. At a pace your comfortable with at the least. And will he get the famous bat form or cloud of bats as a way of travel?

I took a star off for the updating quality everything else is fine, I wonder if you could make the mc the new beast monarch but not evil you know I see the beast monarch as like the apex predator but it doesn't make him evil the fact that the mc is jinwoo's brother would possibly make him surviving that process a possibility you never know think of it as rival alphas at the basic level just add the fact they would be above gods.

I love the story so far, I just want to say I look forward to more!!! So I will update my review as the story unfolds......... KEEP IT UP!!!!!!! :)

The only problem I found is it said two chapters I saw only one chapter if that's wrong I'm sorry I am used to long chapters in stories. So that's why I only gave one star on updating stability everything else is good.

I'd like to say the only problem I have is there is not enough chapters to this story ehence the half updating rank I gave but everything else perfect keep up the good work in this soon to be great story I only ask to not give up on it if at all possible it's hard finding good stories with potential to be even greater then it currently is this might be one of those so I'm excited to read the future potential chapters you cook up for it and if possible could you make the mc a archangel monarch to be one step ahead of his brother he will need an army of Angels and Phoenix.

The story is good so far probably could use a few spell checks but overall very good so far I'm looking forward to what you bring to the story in future chapters at your own pace , have a nice day/night.

I like the story so far however I have a suggestion of making this rimuru look and talk like a true male and not the fanboy the original was if you know what I mean like give him veldora's physic with the blue hair and yellow eyes then everything else would be your direction of how you the author would make it on your own time I do like the cover photo but he could use some more muscle to not look like a toothpick.

I like the story so far how ever I think this story should have a tittle worthy of it like say the Lions pride, also maybe make more lion shifters to equal or out number the wolves possibly.

The story so far is great but I'd think as an idea the main character should become an alpha werewolf as well at the scene when peter offers the bite to stiles but replace that with the main character then after getting bitten kill peter after that we'll see how the story goes.