Webnovel Author: pyritenemo000 - Fanfic&Novel Collection

A genuinely interesting story. Though I only read two chapters, the characters and plot are interesting and the writing style is good. There is an occasional minor spelling error but that's rare. I'm curious about the future chapters and it mixes comedy really well.

To start with, the story IS interesting it's just not a genre I have a real interest in. But in the end the world building is intriguing, if not as detailed as I would like to be able to grasp everything happening. Another negative point is the grammar and spelling. The spelling errors aren't too many to become annoying but there are moments where it's off putting. The same with that last paragraph at the end of the first chapter which is odd and doesn't fit with the start of the story. In addition while It's not a big thing, but the "add to Library" thing at the end of each chapter is also off-putting and normally the recurring request wouldn't be the problem, but it's not put with the author notes/thought so I was admittedly confused at it's appearance at the end of the chapters the first few times. The story is interesting and otherwise well written save for some description details. but has a few of drawbacks that may need to be double checked.

I see il edit my review then

the beginning is extremely misleading then . unless I can't read . Which I suppose I can't . I apologize

I read the first chapter only so my opinion is limited. the writing quality is good and it has an interesting start. I usually don't read system stories since for me they are hard to follow but I am willing to keep reading it.

I read the first chapter of it and while I'm a bit lost as to what exactly is happening here, the story is interesting and very descriptive. Though I don't normally read system/cultivation stories. It seems kinda like a game from what I could gather.

An interesting story with good writing and a lot of key details. A few things made me laugh a bit and though I only read the first chapter I look forward to reading the rest

So I just started reading this and the story is interesting The writing flow is good and it's very descriptive. I'm not usually one to read CEO stories but this one I'll keep in my library since it's genuinely good