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the story is exhilarating to read- the adventure of a school trip which takes an unexpected turn is a brilliant idea for an action packed short short story. The writing is superb with all excellent similes which help to convey the tension and emotion. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Sandy, Veeir, and Jack understood that everyone at the campsite and back home was worried for them but they were completely ecstatic after their great adventure!
The Adventurous Trip to the Forest
Realistic · VEER_KAPOOR
The most exciting part of the story is when Veeir, Jack and Sandy are trying to sleep inside the house, and they are woken by the sounds of wild animals outside. This is most terrifying situation where the boys are in clear danger-this is the climax of the story, when tension rises and rises and sense of the danger becomes worse and worse until it is at the peak which is called the climax...[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The Boys were about to undress from those heavy body armors, helmets, and swords. Then again, the loud roaring sounds near the house frightened them that their hearts were hammering and palms sweated. They broke out in a cold sweat. They all clung to each other in despair. They were numb with fear! They prayed. They chanted. They peeped out of a small hole between two stones of the wall and an ambush of tigers were drinking water from the pond. Their hearts skipped a beat. This was the most frightening moment of the night.
The Adventurous Trip to the Forest
Realistic · VEER_KAPOOR
The story set up, boys' preparation for the trip to Dhikala and fun in bus is well described. Sandy's characterization as class clown is good.
On the way, some children read their favorite books while others were either playing mobile games or watching a movie on their tablets. Sandy was quite popular for his jokes in the class. His hilarious jokes made Jack and Veeir laugh till their stomachs hurt. It was truly a rollicking journey to the campsite. The children arrived early in the evening, the rays of the sun still falling crisply all across Dhikala. The weather was invigorating, unlike Delhi which was stuffy and polluted.
The Adventurous Trip to the Forest
Realistic · VEER_KAPOOR
Three adventurous boys went on a school trip. [img=coins]The description of Jungle and joy of boys are explained very well by author.
It was the most joyous moment for Jack, Sandy, and Veeir when the athletics teacher, Miss John announced that the school was organizing a camping trip to Dhikala, Jim Corbett National Park. Jack, Sandy, and Veeir were on cloud nine dreaming about freedom and four spectacular days of unimaginable fun and excitement. They would return with tales of adventure and thrill. Dhikala was one of the few locations in the country that allowed visitors to spend a few days in the heart of the forest nestled between the outer foothills of the Himalayas and the Shivalik Hills, blessed with freshwater flora and alpine together with lovely weather, its beauty was unrivalled. The national park has been divided into six ecotourism zones: Dhikala, Bijrani, Jhirna, Sonanadi, Durgadevi, and Dhela. The most famous denizens of this forest were the Bengal Tiger and the Asiatic Elephant. The place was considered to be a phenomenal spot for campers and "Lovers of diverse wildlife".
The Adventurous Trip to the Forest
Realistic · VEER_KAPOOR
Thank you for your motivatioN and encouragement
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The Adventurous Trip to the Forest
Realistic · VEER_KAPOOR
Thank you for your motivational words!
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The story is exhilarating to read-the adventure of a school trip which takes an unexpected turn. It is an action packed short story
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The Adventurous Trip to the Forest
Realistic · VEER_KAPOOR
The author created the suspense in the story right from the beginning. The tension kept on rising and rising from classroom to witch world. The witch world imagination was good. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The Mystery of a Frog
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