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It is a story of a intelligently brave boy who fought with witches and wizards. pls. read the story to unearth the suspense.
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I love thd character of main protagonist Veeir.He was a very caring boy who was ready to take risks for his friend.No wonder he got the bravest boy award and the appreciation of media.
[img=coins] There are some great situations in the story. The humor of the classroom scene, finding out the frog language translator app and the scene in the park and excellent scenes in the witches' world.[img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins]
Beautiful story! for kids. My younger one aged 6 loved the plot and scenes in the park. It was quite convincing for a child to believe she was a fairy and not a witch. The temptation was stronger than advice. well done! [img=coins]
Overall every thing is good at this stage of only 8 year old boy twitter so I like every thing .Practice makes a man perfect so do practice regularly.
It is a wonderful story for Kids. I offered it to my son who loved it. The character of Veeir is very inspiring for boys. The value of friendship and the phrase 'a friend in need is a friend indeed' is the moral of the story.
[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] The scenes of witches world were interesting to read. The ice-cream scene was very well handled by main protagonist Veeir.
[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]I find it very lovely story especially character of Veeir. He handled the entire plot so intelligently and bravely which is unbelievable.
The event of digging and entering into witch word was quite creative. The raid in palace and capturing the witches with holy mantras was quite sensational. I thought all characters would become victim of the head witch.
Wonderful plot! The park scene was really imaginary and take the readers to a fantasy land of the fairy world.No wonder Rajvansh got tempted. The author's imagination is appreciable. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The ice cream scene was created quite well. Veeir's smartness to please his friend even though he has to pledge his watch is a good creation...... [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The imagination of the witch world is good. The idea of getting into the witch world through digging the earth was also quite appreciable........ [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The introduction of exorcists in the plot was quite interesting. The power tussle between Baba Maharajji and the witch should have been a little stretched. The author looked in hurry at the end................................[img=coins][img=coins]
love the school scene and tension kept on rising what happened to Rajvansh! The story narration in the classroom was good.......... [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The school scenes are fantastic which are full of tension, innovation humour and prank. The climax is wonderful depicting the win of good over evil......[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The author created the suspense in the story right from the beginning. The tension kept on rising and rising from classroom to witch world. The witch world imagination was good. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] It is wonderful fiction story full of drama,suspense and thrill. I like a few inventive ideas of animal language translator and frog defusing the camera with his tongue.