Webnovel Author: Makai_Man - Fanfic Collection

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2yr

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Other Wolf: Dammit, Jack, there go our press turns again...

The wolf is lethargically moving around while growling, it begins to create ice spikes to attack me, but those are ineffective against my Ice Absorption!

Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

Makai_Man

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Looks good so far! Minor correction - it's 'coarse' when describing a texture, not 'course'.

Not just because it got everywhere. Not just because of how course and rough it was. No, the real problem with sand is that it was all but impossible to build anything on it. With such a loose foundation, houses and buildings were all but guaranteed to sink. And if you were the sort of madman who decided to be an architect in those conditions? Not even the spirits could save you from driving yourself crazy.

The Chronicles of Geyron

Fantasy · Garrick Schultz