Moments 7
The boys were intelligent to prank their friends on the one hand and gathered sympathy from Ms. John for missing the river rafting activity. Good Job! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
"We encountered wolves, bears, and tigers." One of our fellow campers Smith exclaimed "My! My! I wish I had accompanied you! I could have clicked pictures" Simon agreed too. Natalie added "Do you plan to run away tonight as well? Let me know if I could join you." Peter couldn't stay silent and asked them questions which made them chuckle.
The Adventurous Trip to the Forest
Realistic · VEER_KAPOOR
it is still suspense how did good witch arrange the toast, bacon, and coffee. The main protagonist Veeir should have written more on finding with her how she managed human breakfast in the witch world.
Happily, I found a digital application 'frog mysterious translator" that could translate any animal language to English. I asked him to tell me what has happened with him so far. He croaked for about a few minutes, translated as "I was going to attend a Halloween Party along with Samar. We decided to meet at the national park before heading to the party. I was sitting at a bench waiting for Samar. I saw a witch wearing a Barbie costume, a soft hat, and a purple wand next to me on the bench. She looked into my eyes and cast a spell. Within seconds, my head started spinning and I fell unconscious on the bench. My body was turned into a frog during this time".
The Mystery of a Frog
Fantasy · VEER_KAPOOR
It was quite an innovative idea to introduce the mysterious translator in the story which weaved the story forward very well.
Happily, I found a digital application 'frog mysterious translator" that could translate any animal language to English. I asked him to tell me what has happened with him so far. He croaked for about a few minutes, translated as "I was going to attend a Halloween Party along with Samar. We decided to meet at the national park before heading to the party. I was sitting at a bench waiting for Samar. I saw a witch wearing a Barbie costume, a soft hat, and a purple wand next to me on the bench. She looked into my eyes and cast a spell. Within seconds, my head started spinning and I fell unconscious on the bench. My body was turned into a frog during this time".
The Mystery of a Frog
Fantasy · VEER_KAPOOR
you start with a very interesting and unusual idea of a boy who is turned into a frog. I like it and I also like the way your story develops
I was going to my school in the morning, as usual, I noticed a frog hopping a little far away from me. It looked very preposterous to me nevertheless I kept on walking towards the school building. I was startled to see the same frog sitting on my desk in the classroom. The frog resembled my friend Rajvansh. I didn't believe myself so I went to the class teacher. 'Please, Miss. You probably won't believe this but I want to share the mystical thing I had been through since morning. She pretty much believed me that the frog's face was similar to Rajvansh. She thought of speaking with his parents. It was more suspenseful to note the affirmation of his parents. They informed the class teacher "we know it, he went to a park in the late evening yesterday and when he returned, he was a frog, this is a mystery for us too."
The Mystery of a Frog
Fantasy · VEER_KAPOOR
Para is described very well. The tension here rises and rises. At one point in time, it was looking very dangerous that tigers would attack the boys. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Veeir chanted his magic mantras and composed himself. He silently watched the tigers' movement. Each moment passed by like an hour. The tigers drank water to their hearts' content. They moved around like they were on an inspection. Beads of perspiration trickled down Veeir's face. Sandy's heart thumped while Jack gasped noisily. At last, the tigers retreated and disappeared into the jungle. They realized lately the wild animals generally come to the pond for water here. No wonder! The hunter built up the structure close to the water body to hunt wild animals easily. They felt secure in the house so decided to sleep back again.
The Adventurous Trip to the Forest
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