Webnovel Author: Abhrf - Fanfic Collection

Thanks for reading, I'll be posting the new chapter in around a week. 4/5k words.

I admire you sir. I can barely fit in the time...

How do you have time to write all this?

He's an original character. However, there could be some reincarnation type thing when I finish the prologue.

Any criticism?

Thanks for the chapter, the writing is a bit off though.

More about the way the story begins and the slight lack of sense in how it unfolds.

Don't worry too much, this is suggestions not selections. Its more of a way to get my head to spark something fun, sadly everyone seems to be picking the same things.

Future chapters should clear this up though.

Not "kill each other." *One of us will kill the other. She knows she has a certain advantage too ; ). Referring to her childhood, I wouldn't place it on just "bad environment" either. There's a reason her decision making is flawed in how the child sees his parents.

It was worse before the improvement. What do you think makes her dumb?

Thanks bud, I'll start again by the end of this semester and it should be very interesting.

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