Pretty good novel until the 700s. Then, the reality manipulation and time difference shenanigans kicks in, and it just goes downhill.. I WANT BABY COURTNEY BACK FFS. didn't even get a single play date or anything with friends even when one is supposedto be Abbadons enemys kid like wtf. This is why I refuse to read anything with massive time leaps.
Story is a breath fresh air from all the cliche self-righteous hero stories that are popular now, love a Mc that is ruthless and unforgiving monsterous side but also has a duality of caring side for loved ones I love the story so far and can't wait for more!
pretty alright novel so far Likes - Tech System in medieval ages is overpowered, Mc doesn't seem to be a dense moron so far , kingdom building is pretty neat. Dislikes - The progression...Example, chapter or 2 of Mc or Main Antagonist and then 6 or 7 chapters of either irrelevant side characters or processes with the technology such making houses or a damn barbie...
Was a fantastic novel to read if you enjoy medieval-industry type novels with alot of war and conflict. The characters grow as the story goes on and some not for the better. the only real hiccups I had reading this is, A I went in thinking for once that the Mc only had 2 wives and that's all... Hell no he ends basically fucking every new he meets at a point.B is the explanations, throughout the novel there's alot of explaining to try and either describe an item, or set a background for world which can quickly get mind numbing after awhile. Overall I'd say a 4.5/5
Concept is fantastic, execution is shit. Started off pretty good for first dozen or so chapters, then took a hard nose dive.author constantly forgets things e mentioned a few paragraphs before or straight up makes everyone all knowing. premise was a apocalypse regressor with a storage system, which is intriguing. but the other characters constantly act, think, and say things like they have lived for decades in an apocalypse, too which make no sense. sad to say had to drop it after my standard 50 chapter tryout do to it just not flowing or making sense
This book has been deleted.
started decent enough , has an Mc that straight ups blackmails everyone which I found hilarious. only reason dropped rating is that "free" chapters only go up to 18.... I tend to like to be able to read 35-50 chapters of a novel before I start dumping my money on it so gonna have to pass on this for now, Good luck with novel author !
In terms of physical strength, reaction time, and calmness, men were generally better than women.
Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?
Urban · A Small Purple Umbrella
annnnnd done reading , I can deal with an innocent Mc n what not but seriously? a Mc that has gratitude for someone that literally gave only a note oops I killed you teehee~ ? nah hard pass
No matter how this world changed him, at the very least, he would live by what he considered right. That way, he wouldn't let down the god that had given him this second life.
With My System, I Can Even Tame Gods
Fantasy · DXHaseoXD
grammar is understandable, story is a shitshow though... Few chapters in and had to drop it cause it turned into a damn propaganda novel. I understand people like their countries and can be patriotic but damn this is abit ridiculous. if you took this story and turned it into some type of isekai/Reincarnated/Transmigration novel it would be 1000% better and would allow the story without the propaganda.
Undead Mage with No Skill Cooldown
Urban · The Village's Star