Webnovel Author: Brass_Badger - Novel Collection

My pleasure! Always thankful for your support and your comments, I'm glad you're enjoying so far

My pleasure! I'm very thankful for your support these past few days and I'll definitely be posting new chapters soon

This is looking to be a very interesting world! Some writing tips: before you start working on your story, write for ten minutes a day without stopping--don't stop even to edit mistakes. It won't be great writing, but that's OK. When you're finished with ten minutes, read through and pick your favorite sentence and use that to start a new story. Do this every day and you'll be a much faster writer before you know it.

It looks like this prologue is trying to do too much. Think of a prologue as the opening number of a musical, or the short intro before the beginning of an old Star Trek TNG show. Effective prologues give a reader a taste of what's to come and, most importantly, sets the tone for the rest of the story. A lot of what's here is exposition, which is the background and history of the world. This kind of information is best told through the characters in dialogue, or through their actions as they explore, hear stories, uncover relics etc. For the future, try and have exposition told through the characters and not the narrator. You may be surprised as how your world changes for the better

This definitely speaks to the frustrations of many writers--especially the desire of some people to put down and have input on other's writing...at the same time. Poor Chang!