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very bad execution. mc acts like a retard and is overly suspicious and straight up comes to the conclusion that others know about gamer system even though no one would ever doubt it. the whole story is very slow. took 3 chapters for mc to reach home from the orphanage. overall a bad execution.

A very wholesome and stress free take on Naruto with awesome powerups and new point of views of relationships . Though I wanted to read more...[img=recommend][img=recommend]

best villain deku and that revenge was oh so sweet

Author made Naruto start off as a complete badass ,like totally smooth, handsome, strong and all but when it actually matters he just gives a lot of excuses and either he Nerfs Naruto, makes the enemy have Naruto cells or just make it so that Naruto has baggage with him, this leads to the creation of scenarios where Naruto comes off as lame and incompetent (in comparison to how he acts) infact of being stronger than the original.

This is one of my top 3 Naruto fanfics along with systematic shinobi , real civilian shinobi and finally this one. A very nice take on the series, going completely off the original and exploring new ways to gain power.

I just hate it for wasting my time and leaving me with a sour mood. There is no originality and the mc is more of like a beta Arthur, he is someone trying to leach of what is left after Arthur is done in all the situations. He never has the initiative. More like someone trying to say that I knew the answer after someone has already answered. Like letting people know that I can do it too or like saying that I am special too. A true beta indeed.

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