Currently possessing the curse of 30, with 30 chapters I can no longer write ;(
2021-08-10 Joined Brazil
Even though I like Cliffhanger, please avoid repeating what happened in the other chapters when monetizing, as it is charged based on the number of words, some people may find this repetition bad.
And her reason for anger?
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Denying a denial only makes it positive, in this case you said that everyone believes that, but following the next statement, it doesn't make sense
No one couldn't believe it. However, this was the only possibility. There was actually a Tier 2 snake intruding on the competition area. No participant had enough power to actually defeat this monster. There was a possibility that several participants had fallen as the snake's prey.
Sci-fi · Fixten
it would be totally plausible, depending on how statuses actually work in that world, if it's based like a game, or like real life In a game you don't need these statuses for various reasons, be it point limits, non-relevance and everything else However, unlike a game, if based on real life, intelligence would be his ability to think, the speed he thinks, possibly learning things, while a game character is controlled by someone not influenced by status, the way he fights and acts would be based on these silly things If I'm going to try to explain it in the simplest possible way, it's the same as having superhuman strength, but being an idiot who shoots himself in the chest because he thought the gun didn't work.
[Intelligence : 10]
Fantasy · Meowder
I imagined, however, maybe it would be simpler for other readers to read just one profession and understand, as an example, just calling him a doctor, which is assumed to be his main profession.
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Urban · OLD_storage
generally quotation marks indicate speech, but it wouldn't make sense, besides it's better to choose one between Prof and Dr
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Urban · OLD_storage
This sentence was a bit strange, at least the way it was written
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Urban · OLD_storage
but*
I tried every attempt to lighten the theme and add some sunshine and rainbows, But it felt like I was betraying myself in some sort of way...
Fantasy · zowji
Would it be a comma instead of a period here?
As the author, I kind of wanted it to be like that. where a character who had everything at the beginning will eventually lose it all because he was incompetent and arrogant, yet benevolent and kind.
Fantasy · zowji
I have a small ocd so, is it possible to start with lowercase and use She as she?
Is that so? 'hopeful' She says but it was important to kill all those characters for the plot! for my character Jan!
Fantasy · zowji
Hadn't he gone out and asked about body cultivation?
After ensuring enough time had passed, Aksai decided to head out.
Eastern · Grayback
Who is Eren?
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Eastern · Grayback
For a brief moment I believed that he had already died in this paragraph, and I was trying to understand if ghosts talk in this world
In a crumbling, weathered wooden dwelling, an ailing, elderly farmer drew his final breaths upon a groaning bed.
Eastern · Grayback
uses in gaming terms, the meaning is a little different, it's like you use the definition of potato, for a tomato
It was much better than Zhang Shan's Headshot. If he was alone, he would need to meditate and recover HP after killing one monster.
Games · Six Tubes Buddha
Somehow, he felt happy. While both hadn't made it official yet, they knew their relationship wasn't normal and they were closer than just normal friends. No friends would hold hands together and sit next to each other to the point their skin touched.
Fantasy · ShuviLily
digital games, it's easy to know why, there's no respect for anyone, and if you know if you're a woman or a man, then it gets worse, besides, in our culture, games are something "more for boys", so in terms of quantity we see less of them, while it is not impossible, what hinders this most in a professional team are the fans
Among them, 30% were women, which became a bit of a surprise for him if he based it on his previous life E-sport scene where some games' division was different between men and women. But, looking back at his team, he knew that they couldn't be underestimated.
Fantasy · ShuviLily
From now on you swapped Lara for Lana
My Plot Armor System
Fantasy · LightningAsura