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stealing someone's work while they are rewriting the fanfic is not okay and I can understand if you want to share the originals just to read but claiming it your own is kind of disgusting so atleast credit the original author and stop deleting 1 star reviews...........................................

it started out strong i like the fact that he is strong and it shows during fights has interesting romance it just ruins the appeal when there are other reincarnated beings it feels like a disappointment i just hated it

The story started out good. With a reasonable mc. Then comes the time for training, oh boy, I can understand that the character is supposed to be op, but does he have to be so op that a 5 year old can handle that much gravitational force even if he consumed the herbs, I mean give him at least 2 years to adapt and absorb the medicinal value of those two 10,000 year old plants. For me it would've been a great story if you'd have him grow a bit more older, maybe 10 to 13 and from 5 till then he will have to work hard to control his two powerful martial spirits. I mean he basically went from zero to lvl30 in what, 4 months?. Even with the increase in physiology a 5year old's body is still a child's body. I get that he is supposed to be OP but common man, you expect me to believe that he did all that in just 4 months with a child's body with a stronger physique? And then there comes the new arc after the time skip. You expect me to believe that a grown person managing a bank would not at least be a little suspicious that an 8 year old child just walked in and deposit to what amounted to at least be considered rich in that time period? It would have been okay if he'd have been at least a teenager, that would have been believable for he could have gotten it in a reasonable way. I mean who would believe that an 8 year old child can get that amount of money? Not only that but after that he manage to convince two, (from what I know) at least at a spirit master individual to have a discussion with him? an 8 year old child albeit an OP 8 year old, but nonetheless an 8 year old child in the two's eyes. Even if he acted more matured than other 8 year old, they still dont know that he is powerful. So why? I can understand if he is a little bit older but an 8 year old? After that I just stopped if I missed some details, I'm sorry but at that point I'm just at the point of just skimming the chapters. I know its not for me, maybe others may like it but not me. Anyways now that I expressed it all out it still has a great writing quality. At the end of the day its your fanfic so do what you like to do