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His family, his home, his future; it was all robbed by those with power and authority.
The Law was against him, the World was against him.
So he decided to take matters into his own hands.
Now reborn in the One Piece World before the Age or Pirates, a World teeming with corruption and injustice.
Damien must find a reason, a reason to continue. A reason to live.
Will his past repeat itself?
Will he finally give up once and for all?
Or will he grit his teeth and reach for the impossible?
Join him as he goes against all odds in the world of pirates, marines, and revolutionaries, sailing on the Path to Power!
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Writing quality: Well, since I use a translator to translate into my mother tongue, I wouldn't know how to give you a rating, but I suppose it's okay, since you're quite descriptive, in fights you're ok, you know how to put a construction and continuity in fights, I highlight The fight against Enigma, which is quite decent, I put 4 stars because I cannot give an exact judgment due to the fact that I read the fanfic in translator, that's why I give a star for the margin of error. Stability of Updates: It's pretty good, a daily chapter, the only thing I miss would be to put Chapter Packs like 5 chapters in a day or something like that, but outside of that the chapter cadence is pretty good, a 5 stars in this department. Story Development: This is quite good, the beginning of the plot as Born and grows seems tremendous to me, that they give us their motivations in the first chapters is quite good, although they are lost and are not clear in some stories. What I like most about this work is how the MC acts with the world and its members, how it is a motivation for Mihawk, a help for Katakuri and Kuzan, A rival for Kaido, a Kouhai for Whitebeard and Shaky, Each one of these relationships are understood and created in a good way and do not clash at any time. Also take a risk by making history in the time of Roger and Rocks, but use this risk is used to enrich this empty part of history by setting the Overlords that are goals and that have to be reached. Although there are Power ups that could be categorized as cliches and it gains part of its power with the system, when there are important advances it is noticeable that it is due to effort and time, the author does not tremble to prepare his MC with time skips and training , although if he has some other power or cliche but in general terms it is fine, for now the main character knows where he is and where he is going, he does not get stuck in the Rocks crew, he goes to the future, and that is very good, There are some gaps such as the fact that Enigma did not use Lilin to stop the MC, since she was owing him the Gigantization Serum, and at that moment Enigma would have told him that the favor was paid if he helped him stop Damian and Kaido. Character Design: this is one of the parts that I like the most about this work, as it adapts characters that have not come out almost like Rocks or OC characters like Enigma, They cause an impression and respect as the one that Rocks should give, he feels like the leader of a crew like the Rocks and Enigma feel the same way, command respect and behave like the person they are supposed to be, a powerful Overlord who has held his position for many years. About the MC, the character is constantly evolving, he does not stay stagnant and thinks about the future, when he does not correct his mistakes the world does, but he realizes his mistakes and tries to correct them, as when Rocks explained that not all can enter the crew, he was naive and realized and corrected it, The goals are from the first chapters since the author instead of making a first arc that focuses only on the evolution of power of the MC, made a arch that also raises and gives us to show the character of the MC. World Background: The creation of the world is very good, this is made based on the time of Roger and Rocks, a time already seen but little described in the manga and anime, he takes advantage of these gaps to enrich the world by his own hand, putting characters, Islands and settings of his own authorship, which do not seem out of tune with the world of One Piece, although there are some times that he conveniently uses that freedom to drive his characters, such as the supposed island of Death, but they are minor details. When these scenarios created by the author are where an important plot happens, they are endowed with a good description to the point where we can imagine the place with the same animation of the anime
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This is the best one piece fanfic I've ever read, haha I'm tired of readers who always say harsh words or negative words and many are due to their comments, many fanfics that I like are dropped. I hope they understand the many writers who earn nothing just to entertain readers to the point of racking their brains to write a good chapter. Just because of the genre or nature of mc's characters many flock to encourage other readers to pressure the author because they don't like the content of the story, please man if you don't like it don't read it and if you want a fanfic story according to your thoughts write your own fanfic and see the reactions of the people readers who read your writing so that you feel the feelings of the writers when you comment negatively.
this guys claiming this fanfic is originally his and here I am wondering after posting 67 chapters in one day how is he gonna write past Damians awakening without paradox_ and without the quality going down the drain I bet he's just gonna haitus this fanfic at this number of chapters just so he can clai, copywrite when paradox_ starts the fanfic again with a complete overhaul of the start of the fanfic
The best fan fiction on one piece that I have read in my life. I won't say anything about grammar, since I read with the help of a translator, which makes it almost impossible to notice mistakes, but the writing style is very pleasant to the eye. The character of the characters is very natural and there is no feeling that the author has changed them for the sake of his plot. The very infusion of MC into the plot also feels natural, which is very good. The beginning may seem cringe, as well as the actions of the main character in the first chapters may cause some to discard this fan fiction, but then the author has greatly improved. The battle scenes are written beautifully, the improvement of the main character's strength is consistent and fast, but it does not go beyond the OP. Romance also pleases, although the author constantly writes that such scenes are not given to him, for me they look very nice.
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A really good start for a fanfic. Nice devil fruit. Good Talent. I hope the System wont dictate his life, because the strength of the people in One Piece fluctuate very much. And I hope his cheats wont become too rediculous. I like the curse release and a bloodline. I hope he works hard for his power.
wow it has been a long time since I used webnovel, thankfully I did and found this good fanfic. thank you author for writing such good unique story please continue and don't drop p.s if you can make a patreon account so we can support you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Finally the story has stated again. Tired of waiting. Very good story and character and development. Update more ........................................................ ..........
Dope, sincerely I hope it's not dropped like every promising one piece fic. By the way, for those considering dropping the story because of the system at the start being a bit much, don't it gets better, a lot better. The greatest thing about this fic is when it's set, rocks pirate era is so interesting and something I've never seen explored. Forget all those joining the strawhats fics I need more rocks fanfics.
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Welcome back Paradox__ I forgot how good this gem was. Also, I thought you were re writing instead of copying it from the last one. ----------------------
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This is a he said she said kind of moment so i'll read both and keep reading the better of the two even if it turns out to be the fake sorry not sorry.
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As customs I shall drop the shameless 5 star review and get the ball rolling. Damien aka the mc has been reborn from a terrible life. Now he has a mother. Will he live on with the illusion that nothing has changed? That he hasn't changed? Or will something or someone change that thought? Damien will set out to reach the apex of this world alongside a crew of limited numbers, one with the power to truly turn the world upside down. He will venture through the Pirate Age, both before it's ignition and ride through it to reach his goals. He can be a hero to some, a villain to the others and just another pirate to the rest. ----- I hope you guys tag along and enjoy the read!