I'm sorry, Grey1. No excuses from now. Regular chapters from this day forward.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: In the End
Fantasy · jekarya
It's the least I can do in return for your support, Grey1. I'm also super excited about writing Victor the white-pupil Wanderer!
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: In the End
Fantasy · jekarya
I understand the assignment. If I outline right, we may meet Victor the Wanderer, a rapier-wielding mutated Mutant Slayer, before chapter 50 even. No promises, though. He may appear later than that. (Also... white pupils? You mean irises?)
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: In the End
Fantasy · jekarya
Ok, ok, I see you. This is indeed a cool power! I'm thinking maybe they can turn even other emotions into tangible things, not just fear into poison, when they reach their maximum potential. I have some characters I can give this power to, but if you want otherwise, let me know. Take your time. Maybe give me their personality or something of that nature--who they are. You don't have to reply right away. As the world of this story opens up more, you'll be able to put your character even better into the narrative. Not that you have to. If this is it, that's fine too. Cheers.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: In the End
Fantasy · jekarya
Then share it already, I'm excited!
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: In the End
Fantasy · jekarya
Feel free to think about it, Grey1, but if you have anything--and I mean anything--in mind, let me know. I'll figure out some way to fit that character into this power system. Just make sure to not make them too OP, that's all.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: In the End
Fantasy · jekarya
Glad you liked it! Your comments serve as a great reassurance that I'm getting across what I write. (It's difficult to judge that all by yourself, so thanks!)
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: In the End
Fantasy · jekarya
For sure! But who likes to write a story only they can enjoy? I will write shorter chapters--or try to--but I promise they won't be too short.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Queen’s Pet
Fantasy · jekarya
I'll try my best!
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: Spite Antivenom
Fantasy · jekarya
I try. Thank you!
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Smokescreen
Fantasy · jekarya
Thank YOU for reading, Grey1!
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Six Shots
Fantasy · jekarya
Thanks for commenting! It's readers like you who make this whole thing make sense.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Slay that Mutant
Fantasy · jekarya
It's connected to the previous 3 paragraphs. Had to break it up to not make a wall of text. Read them together and it flows as intended. Though, I understand your point.
And despite revealing himself to be the spy of the same woman who'd helped Artur infiltrate the safe city, still wanting a bloody battle.
Slay that Mutant
Fantasy · jekarya