Yeah after the 4th chapter, the lengths increasef
ch 0 3 The Gregorian Continent
Fantasy · TobbyBrahm
Very good start. I wonder what thks family did to ouR mc
ch 0 1 Clean Massacre
Urban · PerkyPompous_Pixie
Sadist much??😂
In the dead of the night right at the heart of the town, stood a young man in his late twenties. He took a deep breath of the still air, feeling rejuvenated by the cries of humans begging for mercy. The cracks of whips from his soldiers excite him, especially when the sounds of terror echoed the silent night. But! The night had just begun.
Urban · PerkyPompous_Pixie
The story is progressing wonderfully. it is easy to understand and digest. My only problem are the tenses and some spelling errors. Other than that, every thing is top notch. I also appreciate mature content, so yes great work
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Noted! Improvements will be all round
Read primordial ascendance
The owner felt like his brain was heavy, it felt dull like pounded yam and mashed tofu. It was a freakish comparison, but it was apt for his situation. He felt as if his pituitary gland was put on the burning fire.
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Fantasy · GREAT