Webnovel Author: ruffles_096 - Novel Collection

Yeah, that's fair; after re-reading over some of the later chapters and the noble meetup, I realized that I made my mc way too nice, even to the point of cluelessness, and once I get to editing later chapters I'll make sure to fix that. Thanks for pointing it out though ^_^.

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Don't worry about it, I know how easy it is to get carried away when criticizing someone, also thanks for ranking my novel so high on your list ^_^.

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After looking further into it, I see myself agreeing with your statements regarding the potential danger merchants pose to Moura and would like to apologize for my lack of thought while writing this part of the book. I would also like to thank you for pointing it out and will be sure to fix this part of the story before making any new chapters.

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Correct me if I am wrong, but to my knowledge, unlike nobles, merchants did not own armies, and although economically influential, ordinary merchants were at best on par with nobles. As for selling blueprints to weapons, I am pretty sure it would take someone truly braided to bring the concept of such weapons into a world where countries are constantly at war. And may I remind you, carding machines and water frames were used to facilitate the production of textiles, not as weapons.

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Thanks for the recommendation; I'm using the free version right now, but I'm not going to upgrade to premium; I just don't want to spend money on it.

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No, it's not. There's no specific reason; I just personally don't like the notion of harems and don't want them to become a prominent part of the story, nor believe they would help the story in any way.

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Currently, he is slightly taller than the average for his time, being 109 cm tall, has brown curly hair, is caucasian, and is not particularly handsome or ugly. (Sorry if the description is not up to the standard, I am not good with character design and mostly relied on what I could find regarding Afonso of Portugal)

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Thanks for pointing that out; I'll make sure to change that before the end of the week ^_^

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Yea, someone else also pointed that out, and it will be fixed by the end of the week, it's just that writing new chapters takes up most of my free time, sorry for the inconvenience.

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My bad, I'll make sure to fix that this coming week; thanks for pointing that out btw. ^_^

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Thanks for the feedback, and I'll try to update more often ^_^

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Thank you; Muito obrigado ^_^ (PS: I assume that this is how you say thank you in Portuguese, please correct me if I am wrong.)

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Glad to hear that ^_^

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WARNING SPOILERS AHEAD Honestly, I just wanted a reason for the mc to go to the new world, but I didn't want to make them miss out on too many of the wars that happened around that time in Europe. Without being forced to contribute of course, so considering Spain's active war history, Cristopher Colombus going to Portugal first when asking for money, and Jhon the II's competence at ruling I felt that Portugal would be a good place where to have the beginning of the story to take place.

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Assuming that this is not just a bot, sorry, but I do not want to monetize this novel in any way as it's just a passion project of mine, and the second I feel pressure to update constantly, I will probably end up dropping the book.

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Thank you very much ^_^

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