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is there any romance at all? i have read till 33 and i think till there it had none, don't remember as it had been a while back

Amazing story from male point of view. A rare romance and business management novel which does not have harem or annoying charecters who feel forced. Realistic and refreshing. 9/10 would reccomend

author should atleast answer questions

It is made out in a language which is focused more on eloquence and sophistry than practical use and ease of reading. This makes it a chore to read it hence breaking my immersion. I genuinely tried to read for the good premise it promised but the complex language used helped put me to sleep in no time twice. This takes away from the reading experience and immersion making it not compelling enough to persue the end of the story and sadly I will be dropping it as I am here for my enjoyment not to be educated on my new words and ways to form sentences to depict the same scene in a much more complex and beautiful way.

no worries. I see the potential and hope my review helps.

can be much better. i feel that later on you focused more on the side charecters that the mc and fmc. too many charecters to keep upbwith at the early stages can also ruin it if you focus on them all. first decelop the main charecters a bit and then focus on others a bit not the other way around.

awesome.[img=Feeling it] some of the best romance novel. really love the main leads. wholesome [img=More pls][img=Loving it] there is charecter development for fmc too.[img=Smug]

it is good. charecter development of mc and fmc. wholesome family moments and romance.