Always looking for funny things to do.
I think it's a good idea with potential, though the main character feels a bit flat because you often write her as foolish or careless. However, these are things that can be fixed, the story is just beginning. Don't give up, and thank you for the effort you put into this work.
Anime & Comics · EchoingDusk
It is a good story, it has good writing, moves more or less quickly, the main character is a beauty, but I think I can't continue reading it, it is too tragic in my opinion. It made me cry for a long time and it's not even close to being over. So I'll come back when it's finished or I've calmed down enough to continue reading, because it's honestly a good story.
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
Thanks for the chapter
ch 136 Chapter 134: Mystic Arts
Anime & Comics · A_poky1ninja
Tanks for the charter.
ch 70 S2E70 - On the Road Again... Again... Again?
TV · Sorrest
no sería "A ver..."?
Haber…..
Fantasy · SlukZero
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
I think it's a good idea with potential, though the main character feels a bit flat because you often write her as foolish or careless. However, these are things that can be fixed, the story is just beginning. Don't give up, and thank you for the effort you put into this work.
ANBU: Card System In Naruto
Anime & Comics · EchoingDusk