Webnovel Author: AngelsEnd - Novel Collection

I just always look to see what I can improve on, so thank you. Also I would love with you would read the first chapter and see if theres anything I still need.

I just updated the first chapter to have more detail.

Yes, I believe I can do better. Im going to update the chapters a little soon to have more detail. I will reply again when im done and I would like to know how much better it is.