XD tysm for the review!
Oooh, I'm glad you liked it!
Ty for the review! ^w^
Yepsss
-3rd person pov-
Fantasy · Snow_Fox18
Wondering that as well, not sure XD
Eyyy I'm from the Philippines too I mentioned it in my book rin actual XD
ch 0 1 Prologue I - It all Ended
Fantasy · UelUel
Ohhh, where are you from? Just curious ^w^ also have you tried grammerly? It's rlly good even the free version
ch 0 1 Prologue I - It all Ended
Fantasy · UelUel
This chap is a bit of an info dump, and a little hard to process, I couldn't understand most of the references and I'm still fairly confused what a world fragment is, but I like the fantasy setting and I find this pretty good so far
ch 0 2 Prologue ll - Memories Of The First World
Fantasy · UelUel
Woah, I love the start! The world building is great! But grammer and punctuation could use a bit of work, but nonetheless an great start to a unique story♥️
ch 0 1 Prologue I - It all Ended
Fantasy · UelUel
The pacing feels a bit fast, writing style is good but a little... Emotionless I guess?? Not that it's bad but it's just lacking in detail and feel that gets you into the characters and immersed in the story but so far the first cp is good
ch 0 1 A Life In A Chapter
Urban · deadpotential
Writing style is a 10/10 very descriptive, not repetitive, and is pleasantly lacking in info dumps, story development is also 10/10 not too slow and not too fast
ch 0 2 Part 2 : Outcast And The Shadow Deity
History · ToshiroOne
The first chapter was amazing, not usually my type of novel because of how serious it is but it's very well executed and keeps me interested. I also love how easy it is to read♥️
ch 0 1 [Vol.1] Part 1 : Outcast And The Shadow Deity
History · ToshiroOne
I feel the same way 😭
ch 0 1 [Vol.1] Part 1 : Outcast And The Shadow Deity
History · ToshiroOne
Tru XD
Yet, through all my reflection, I can find no neglect. I see no fault. I know no sin, but of that which may be beyond me.
Fantasy · Bibliophillic
Tysm! I appreciate the review!
I Reincarnated Into An Op Villainess!?
Fantasy · Snow_Fox18